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Intro:

I watched as the people around me acted as though nothing was wrong,even though people lay beneath them dieing because of their sins. As I left the room,sickened by the screams that only I could hear,I noticed another like me. The variety of us was few. All that was left was a disgrace to our ancestors. Stating that death is all there is we made a pact that for ever we shall live,but first we would look into the eyes of those who lay dead beneath us. That is how I got to being what I am. A beast that is neither dead nor alive. A soul that has no place in heaven or hell. A person with no limits. A Night Breather is what I am,and not matter the cause of my words I`ll always say that living is a deathwish.

"Medonyke!". His voice woke me from my daze.I looked up to see James running to catch up with me."You forgot to tell me what a night breather is," he said waiting for me to tell him exactly what I was."A night breather is neither a vampyre nor a witch or shape shifter.A night breather is all of those,left to spend an enternity in darkness." I said.James looked at me,a frown forming.I sighed and walked away.I looked back to find the other nightbreather,but he was gone.I heard the teacher yelling at me as I left the school.I couldn't take it anymore.As I walked to the Circle I realized I wouldn't be allowed to talk to the council without my parents.I turned around and headed home,but when I got there my parents were gone and Silver was laying on the floor covered in the blood of a True Nightmare.

It sounds like it could be interesting, but you need a lot more detail and a lot more words. An introduction to a story shouldn't only be a paragraph. It should be a scene. You gave us no place, no time really and no sense of who your character is.