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 Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:02 pm
poetry? u like it? ur poinon? etc; (you can post a poem if u lik) (JUS ANYTHING REALLY)
do u like mine?
You know when the river flows
Where the wind goes
How hard it blows
Where they end noone knows
You know how the sun shines
How the light blinds
How is it ALL mine
How sharp it stings you lika porcupine
You know how the grass is green
The color jumps out like a jellybean
How it grows fast,or slow, inbetween
And hides things weve never seen
You know the winter days are cold
Everyday people grow old
Things start to unfold
What fun memories in this season we each hold
You know how the sky is blue
Every second people are born anew
How it speaks to our feet...our shoes
and yet we look up to it to a find a clue of what to do
i made it yesterday lol :3
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:07 pm
Ilove the poem i give you 2 thunbs up if i had 3 thumbs i give it three lolz
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:14 pm
Ah, free verse. I like how it all just melts together and rhymes so well!
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:19 pm
I know its so good it rhymes really good i give it a 10/10 love -2 thumbs up-
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