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The Significant Witch: The Ancient Spell

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SapphireDiamondz

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:55 pm


This is information on what my book is all about. Note that this is the first book of a series and that there are two narrators. But for this, none of them will be narrating. Please tell me if it's good so far and some of your ideas to be put in here. I'm fine with that!

Kari Wilson faced a tragedy at a young age. She killed her own parents using her mysetrious powers. Fleeing from it all, she ends up alone and scarred. But when a mysterious voice speaks to her guiding her to the start of everything, Kari experiences what she really is. A witch, the significant witch.
Ten years later, starting fresh with her life, Kari makes a new friend. His name is Sean Logan. He shares a sorrow past like Kari. But what Sean doesn't share with her is his secret. He is a witch hunter and targets the witch who killed his parents.
Both having no parents and only each other to rely on, the two desperatly struggle to keep their true identites a secret from one another. With evil appearing in the way, their goal becomes difficult and so does their friendship. As they continue on Kari and Sean will both discover facts about the witches and the matrial that could help them both; the ancient spell. But who will be the first to recieve it?
PostPosted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:22 pm


I think it sounds like a good idea. Very interesting to say the least. Is there a bigger organization of Witch Hunters that he is a part of or is it simply him alone? That could cause some conflict if they meet up with people from the organization that he knows and perhaps she had a run in with or something.

I'm just throwing an idea out there so you don't really have to pay attention to it. Ha ha, but I would like to read it. :3

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:56 am


Red-Queenie
I think it sounds like a good idea. Very interesting to say the least. Is there a bigger organization of Witch Hunters that he is a part of or is it simply him alone? That could cause some conflict if they meet up with people from the organization that he knows and perhaps she had a run in with or something.

I'm just throwing an idea out there so you don't really have to pay attention to it. Ha ha, but I would like to read it. :3


Yes, he is part of organization of witch hunters. And every member in that organization must have a main goal. And Sean's is to kill the witch that killed his parents. You know, that's pretty good. I should put that some of the hunters check on Sean at his school disguising themselves as new students. That could cause problems for Kari because she can tell who the witch hunters are while the hunters can tell when a witch is nearby.
Oh, this is gonna be great!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:02 am


Red-Queenie, I'll be posting some parts of the stories on here so you can check them out and, if you want, add in some stuff and point out errors.

Other people are welcomed to do this too!!

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:14 am


I'm very excited to be able to read it. It sounds very exciting. :3 I will definitely give you some help. Hope to see it soon. :3
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