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i am old staggerfox Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 1:41 pm
Spin me a tale, weave me a whisper, tell me the words that lie on the winds.
YES a POETRY contest!
I will be the judge I am very picky about poetry(on DA i don't even read other peoples poetry) :V
Rules: No hating
PRIZES
1st place gets angelic camisole! 2nd place will get normal laurels
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:10 pm
Hmm.... I'll submit one x] do I just post it here?
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i am old staggerfox Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:12 pm
blakSakura
Hmm.... I'll submit one x] do I just post it here? yes :V
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:53 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:55 pm
It's been a while when I started
To realize that you're the one I needed
But it hurts me to say that
It can never so true
That one melody of our bond
Will be soon broken into two
I fear of this in the beginning
Warned myself not to go any deeper
Yet your warm embrace of words
Keeps my hopes up of being with you
I deny all of this
Though it still hurts me to say
That it must end right away
Before you realize
I just do not exist in this true life.
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 9:58 pm
any form or style of poetry is allowed
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i am old staggerfox Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 10:50 pm
As the wind blew by outside my window. I stood there and stare as tears drop has fallen. From deepin my eyes i cannot see. From deepin my soul i cannot be free. But deep down my heart i can now rest. As the flower blooms once more again.
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 10:33 pm
The reflection as clouded as the memory, that I grasp to. Holding onto sand, it slips away bit by bit. I look into the mirror, as often as I breathe. “Do I look okay?” “Should I try to stay away?” My thoughts race as people stare, their cold eyes connect with mine. I see their harsh judgment, the cruel words through the stillness of their face. Close your eyes. Breathe. Keep living. Just don’t let them see you fall. Be the perfect being that they see you as.
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:19 pm
Its sweet the words he whispers, To convince me of his loyalty. I need no tender promises tonight, Tonight the heat will consume us, Burn us fullfill us make us whole.
Sweet, the care he always takes, even though it is not what he desires. His hands that warm flushed skin, Leave trails of feeling, of need.
Sweet his caring, against brutal nature His dark eyes hold sadness, hope lingers As if love and lust hold the keys to his salvation In the dark of his lovers room where no one can see it I love you my sweet is All I can hear
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:02 pm
cloud
floating in the air like fluffy cotton amid traveling across the shinning seas to the distant lands soaring throughout the wind so free between hovering in the vivid sky up so high morphing into different shapes and flowing through the space with freedom trailing along a rainbows fading path by glistening in the sunshine’s affectionate warmth crying the doldrums across the earth while feeding the eager flowers with watery tears changing the atmosphere full with emotion as drifting within the current of life walking amongst the sun above whilst providing a soothing shade for weary creatures below playing hide and seek together with fiends or dancing with heavenly angels against rays of light guiding a plane towards its destination as rising along with the hopes of many smiling upon aged existence and imagining higher than any kite can reach growing beyond the wishing stars while dreaming dreams under the milky moon spreading wings outstretched to blanket the earth once flying over the dusky eve of clay near to the clear fields of the streams living life as a cloud
- ZNightmare
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:04 pm
can we submit more then one? >3>
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:19 pm
ZNightmare can we submit more then one? >3> these are all wonderfully written poems and there will certainly be winners, but i have to say one entry per person. No worries for there shall be more poetry contests in the future because i <3 poetry
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i am old staggerfox Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 1:24 pm
it's fine :'D i was in a peoetic mood and in the need for peotry~ but now i am in my scrapbooking mood ^^
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:48 pm
Mr stagger when is this judged? Hugs Setsuna Ai
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i am old staggerfox Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:16 am
Setsuna Ai no Kitsune Mr stagger when is this judged? Hugs Setsuna Ai hmmm not going to release that cuz i want to give people time to carefully craft their works of art. poetry must never be rushed
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