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 Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:17 am
Under Construction. Trying to kick start things. I haven't really rp'd very much, and never started one so tell me if I should change something. sweatdrop
The old tavern bustles with activity.Noise fills the air, muffled by the heavy oak door, as the group goes up the six wide steps. Through the door is a large room. A bar is against the back wall with its many stools. Above, a narrow balcony floats above the bar and left side of the building. Here and there tables and chairs dot the room.
Behind the counter the barkeeper pours drinks, watching the room all the while. Noone can never know when a patron might get a little too rowdy, and need to be thrown out. A few townspeople sit at the tables near the door and windows. In the dark nooks of the corners of the place sit people with weathered looks and looks of impatience as though they were waiting for someone.
(ichihollow 21 here; fixing this so its in third person)
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:54 pm
No, you did good in starting it. We just need to get people to make charecters now.
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ichihollow 21 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:02 pm
Nice start! So we just do as kozmo said with getting charaters started, so I posted a sticky saying to make them there. I shall review them and we get started. For now we are just setting the scene so we are good
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:22 am
Nice job! Just one thing, it would be easier to keep track of the events if we RP in 3rd person. Kind of like telling it as a story
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ichihollow 21 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:18 pm
Suddenly the door to the bar opens and a group of people enter the bar. The bartender's face lights up as these people come in.*You may be wondering who these people are* They all look different in their own ways......
A young woman comes up to the bar, she is about 5'8 and has black hair with red streaks in it. A young fox cub rests on her shoulder."Hey Cale" she says. "Howdie there young lass. What bring ye to me tavern this fine day?" The young woman looks around and whispers"aaaaaaaAAAAADDDDVVEENNTTUURRREEE!!!!!!" she begins and ends in a yell that makes all the other patrons turn and stare. The bartender laughs loudly and says"Of course it always is that with you is it not Izzy?"
Izzy smiles and nods enthusastically, while........
(You guys continue from there and this is what Izzy looks like incase you didn't see  but with black hair and red streaks)
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:17 pm
"You sure know how to make a spectacle of yerself don't ya Izzy?"
A young man, about 6"2' strides up and sits at the bar. I'll have a Smoulderberry brew barkeep! He says whimsically.
The bartender is suprised at his outrageous attire. "Those glasses look like they could put an eye out son, where did you ever happen across those?
"Long story" the young man said. "Well, not really long but this little menace here (Looks over at Izzy) has asked me to tell it so many times she knows it better than I do! The young man laughs softly. "How've ye been Cale?"
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:32 pm
“Hey Izzy, you being obnoxious again? I could hear ya all the way outside,” Seth said as he walked inside the pub. “Hey captain Alphonse, hey Cale, how’s it going?” He walked over to the bar, I’ll just take a water for now Cale, in case something happens I want to have my senses.(edited by ichihollow 21, cause he spelled it wrong)
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:59 pm
"Well Captain, I have been with you the longest outta the shipmates we have strolling on through the door." Izzy goes around the captain to talk to the other barkeep that just came in.
"Oh and you should tell the story Captain. Better from you than me."Izzy grins wickedly and continues the conversation, but remarks to Seth"Course' ya can hear me, I shouted just so you could hear it."
Izzy starts to drink the Energy drink given to her.
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ichihollow 21 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:00 pm
stressed "Seth, remember the talk we had about using my name?" The captain looms over him with a look that could kill.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:08 pm
eek "Um I rember it now... yeah." he laughs nervously. "Oh hey i have to go.. now captain" Seth gets up and hides by Izzy. "Dang Izzy help I made the captain mad." he smirked as he said this.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:11 pm
"Oh great, hide behind the hyper one!" "Izzy, will ye let me smack im' or not?" He said reaching for Seth
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:18 pm
"Um if I have a vote, I vote no on the smacking. Izzy back me up here! I will give you a cookie. I bought it just before I came in here."(edited by ichihollow 21)
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ichihollow 21 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:23 pm
"Wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll, I dunno, I mean how big is the cookie? You know what? This could be payback from that one time!!!!!! Yeah go ahead Ace! Do it!!!!" She says with a wicked grin and trots away to a young man reading a book with 3 swords by his waist. One red, one white and the last is purple.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:24 pm
"Would ye pefer burns?" Alphonse flashes his sword "Or should I just beat ye senseless?"
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:32 pm
"Awww come on Izzy, you know that was an accident!" he yelled as she walked away. "Um I would prefer(edited by ichihollow 21) we fight with swords, I have a chance to win if we do." he smirked and grabbed the handle of his sword. What do you say captain, loser buys drinks for the crew?
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