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 Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:57 pm
Name: Marianne Vildier [Vihl-deer]
Aliases/ Nicknames:
Mary
Physical Description:
A woman with green eyes, constantly hidden by her glasses, needed to help her vision. She stands 5, 4 and has a small mass of muscle. She has long black hair that falls to her lower back with a purple streak in her bangs.
Zanpakuto:
A curved blade with a curved handle to match. The handle is black, but the blade remains the normal color of steel. It is a little heavier than the average katana, but Marianne manages to wield it with one hand. (this is similar to her sword, but I'm going to draw a finished version)
Zanpakuto Spirit:
Viktoria
Shikai: -not yet achieved-
"Let our enemies writhe in pain... Viktoria!"The sword's blade grows longer, and the handle straightens out. A dark aura eminates from the blade, strengthening it's attacks, but adding quite a bit of weight to it. She can do a few few things with this dark aura, like making a small, temporary barrier to protect her, or short offensive beam. All of these things take up quite a bit of energy.
ABILITIES:
Dark Shell-Marianne's dark aura disappears around her. Whenever an enemy attack attempts hitting her, the darkness appears around her and slows weak attacks to a halt. The darkness acts like a hard layer of skin, deflecting weak attacks, and lowering the power of strong ones. This ability only lasts for so long, but can be reused after a while.
Inner Strength-The density of the darkness surrounding Marianne's blade increases. This adds more power to the weapon, without adding too much weight. This ability takes up a moderate ammount of energy, but can be used multiple times, stacking up the power.
Black Bullet-Similar to bala, an ability used by the arrancar. Marianne holds her hand out, and from her palm shoots out a dark ball, or "bullet". It is extremely fast, can be fired multiple times, and takes up very little energy.
Bankai: -not yet achieved-
"Show them the emptiness of oblivion... Viktoria!"The sword itself disappears into a ball of darkness, and reappears as a ring. This ring is the source of her newfound power. It lets her control the darkness completely, from having it shield her, to making it explode on contact with an enemy. It lets her do things from create weaons, to increase her speed.
ABILITIES:
Dark Armory-Marriane can create almost any type of weapon(Most of them are weak, and break easily) out of the darkness. It takes no energy whatsoever, and can be repeated over and over again. If she uses up a little energy, she can make the weapon more efficient, increasing it's strength and durability.
Shadow Beam-Marianne holds out one hand, and within it, a black ball charges. After about ten seconds of charging, a large beam shoots from her hand. The beams strength, and length depends on how long it is charged.
Ulterior Oblivion-Darkness slices through the air wherever Marianne raises her arm. It takes little energy, and has the force of a giant blade. It is extremely useful, and is Marianne's main attack in Bankai.
Fateful Mirage-Marianne's speed increases, along with the overall power of all her attacks(I would like to go into further deatil into this one later).
Special Accessories:
Marianne has a ring on her left hand, and it is similar to the one she uses during bankai(except the colors are switched). It does not do anything special, but it is extremely important to her. It was given to her by her sister before they started their new lives.
Skills:
Marianne is pretty skilled with a blade because her brother taught her how to use one when she was little. But she never liked weapons, so she never became an expert with a sword. But, when she was still alive, she trained in hand-to-hand combat almost every day(Tae kwon do to be specific).
Abilities:
N/A
Personality:
Marianne is somewhat anti-social, and almost too mature to be healthy. She is extremely strict when it comes to orders, and is the go-to person when everyone else fails. She loves the few friends she knows enough, and would do anything to ensure their happiness.
Biography/History:
Marianne had an abusive family, who would always punish hew for the things her siblings did. One day she snapped, and approached her father, and began cursing and screaming at him for all the horrible things he did to her. After that, she turned around and tried to leave, but he blocked the door, and grabbed her by the throat. He strangled her to death, and the entire family decided to hide the body(she was 16 when she died). It was never found, and they continued their lives as if Marianne hadn't even been born. When she arrived in the Soul Society, she was adopted by an old man, and his two children. They became his father, sister, and brother. Eventually their father died, and the three children were stricken with grief. The three decided to get over it, and get on with their lives. They all took their seperate paths, and Marianne decided to become a shinigami, hoping to start over again, and live a happier life.
Powers:
Marianne is extremely bad when it comes to kido, but she would love to learn more.
-Hado #1 sho
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 9:25 pm
It's done for the most part, but eventually I'm going to add a bit more to each of the section, and I would like to upload a few pictures.
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 12:58 am
It looks okay for the most part. Obviously more detail on Shikai and Bankai would be nice but if you are planning on adding more later just make sure it is approved by a mod. You might want to start thinking about possible Divisions you might like to join and what not. Till then I suppose it is fine for an unseated. Might want to wait for someone else's input however just to be sure I didn't miss anything important.
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 7:44 pm
Okay, I added a bit more to the profile like abilities of my zanpakuto and such.
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:58 pm
Okay with Dark Shell I would stray away from a definite block if that was not how you meant it you might want to specify how much it can take. Other than that it seems to be alright to me. You can probably go ahead and put in an application to a Division you would like to join (if it has one).
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 9:06 pm
Yeah, I definately didn't mean for that to be a 100% block.
Dark Shell-UPDATED
Appearance-UPDATED
Zanpakuto-DRAWING
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:22 am
Looks good Xeno, and I accept unless someone else finds something wrong with it. :]
Have fun, and do what Clifford told you! D:<
xD
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Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:38 am
The only fault i could find was that the attacks of bankai and shikai need more description (and maybe describing the personality of her spirit), other then that i agree with the other 2 on this profile.
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