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Nonmuerto Criatura || Fraccion 2# Espada || Arrancar u/c

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 4:17 am


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____________________кησωη ιηƒσямαтιση:

ƒυℓℓ ηαмє: Nonmuerto Criatura - Undead Creature
ηι¢кηαмє: Tura
нєιgнт: 6ft 11in
ωєιgнт: 150lbs
αgє: N/A
яα¢є: Fraccion (Espada 2#) - Arrancar
ρнуѕι¢αℓ тяαιтѕ: Tura is considered rather "lanky" amongst his kind. As Unlike most large Arrancar that are brutish along with the enourmas height, he is rather skinny. He walks with some for of eleganc, but that is only when he does walk, as he generally crawls in a rather strange animalistic way. Combined this with his Stereotypical horror "mummy" like appearence, you can see how he gained his name Nonmuerto Criatura - Undead Creature. Although he acts animalistic his voice is laced with elegance and intellect, all the points he makes are always valid and apply in depth to the point of his understanding of the situation. Though generally, he only speaks to his "Master" as he calls him.


____________________zαηραктσ ιηƒσямαтιση:

zαηραкυтσ ηαмє: Esqueleto Chakram
zαηραкυтσ яєℓєαѕє: Tura's Zanpaktou takes the form of the weapon known as Chakrams, basically giant star like weapons. They hold many abilities. But their most notable ones are as followed. They always comeback to Tura no matter the circumstance, a good example would be if he threw them they would come back either like a boomarang or materilize back into his hands. The next ability is that strangely enough they have two "element" affinities. Though this only a claim made by Tura. As the only apparent element they have is the element of Wind or as most including himself, call it the Hurricane Element. As when ever he throws them, their spinning motion creates large gusts of winds, though it is only when he uses them in unison with his techniques do these dinds become even close to being dangerous. And their final notable ability is their sharpness and durability. They are reportedly to be able to cut through Shikai of members 3rd seat upto unseated members. And all non released Shikai stand absolutly no chance against them.

яєℓєαѕє тє¢нηιqυєѕ:
Huracán Designacion || Hurricane Creation: This technique is basic in principle, basically when used in conjunction with the fast rotation of the Chakrams when thrown, Tura basically creates Hurricane like winds, they can blow back basically all Projectiles. And the strength of the winds is that of a regular Hurrican, Tornadeo, Willy Willy, what ever you would call them. Only those with a Wind Affiliated Zanpaktou can move freely within these winds.

Algido Viento || Icy Winds: Basically this technique allows the winds created by his chakrams to become icy cold, long exposure to these winds will cause his targets to go into a Hypothermic state. (15 posts.) As the winds pick up the area surrounding them begins to become frozen in ice, until his technique ends. (15 posts.)

Cuchilla de Afeitar Corte || Razor Blades: This is the final technique these weapons hold, taking advantage of the concept of compressed air being able to cut, and the already sharp edges of the Chakrams, basically compressed air is forced around the blades of the chakrams in a spinning motion basically increasing their cutting ability greatly.

яєѕυяяє¢¢ιóη ƒσям: I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.
яєѕυяяє¢¢ιóη αρρєαяєη¢є: I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.
яєѕυяяє¢¢ιóη яєℓєαѕє: I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.

яєℓєαѕє тє¢нηιqυєѕ:
I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.
I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.
I will create once I have earned the right to start it's training.


____________________ρєяѕσηαℓ ιηƒσямαтιση:

ρєяѕσηαℓ ѕтуℓє: Tura is somewhat of an enigma, as the only person who he actually speaks to is his master. Espada 2#. He is an inteligent and quick thinker. He does not think of himself as superior, yet he as an dominant aura about him occasionally.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:20 pm


Looks okay so far.

But.

Although it is true that you do not start off with a Ressurreccion, you MUST include its attacks and a description in the profile. This can be changed, of course, and edited as necessary. You'll type it all up, and simply put 'Not Achieved' before it.

Also.

You need a biography. This can be his life as a human (they all were at some point), as a Hollow evolving into Menos and etc, and then how they came across Mother and the rest of Las Noches.


And . . . A question. Is the 'release' you talk about under zanpakuto information as in a Shikai release? Like, releasing the zanpakuto itself? Arrancar don't have those- they have Ressurreccion, and the powerful ones possess a Segunda Etapa (though as of right now only a select few Arrancar have a Segunda Etapa.)

Once all that is done, I'm fine with you. :3 (Sorry If I sound like a b***h, I'm in kind of a bad mood and I think I'm getting sick, so . . . Yeah. Its not you, its Whimsy being bitchy 'cuz she feels like crap. :3)


EDIT;;

Alright. I know its u/c, I just wanted to point a few things out so that you could fix 'em while it's u/c, so that we don't have to send you back to the drawing board after you finish. :3

-_Whimsy Desu_-
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