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 Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:05 pm
Beauty slapped across her face
That's what it is
It isn't real
It just sits there
Is gawked at
She's gawked at.
She wants to remove it
Remove all that is outside
What she feels and is
Inside
She hates being
Objectified
For what she is there
Instead of right
Here.
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 9:48 am
Bravo ~ Clap Clap Clap ~
The poem was wonderful ~ Delicate yet rough and simple ~
Keep up the good work ~
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dramaartwriting Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon May 31, 2010 10:09 am
I guess there are different types of poetic content, such as philosophical poems and story poems. I favor the story poems, but though this is more philosophical, it isn't bad, it has an interesting way of putting the thought.
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