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 Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:20 pm
Change Happens
By Sarah aka Vampire
11/26/09
The way I loved him was strong
The way I loved him was wrong
My depression was long
He never loved me, he never liked me
The thought never occurred that we will never be
He punched a hole through my chest
Therefore pain wouldn't let me rest
I was trapped in my own mind
My emotions had to run and hide
Depression was a blanket that covered my soul
His heart was darker than the blackest coal
He will never change; I can see that in his face
Over many years my heart was healing at a slow pace
Each year my heart gained speed
I was finally beginning to realize what I need
I desperately needed confidence
Reaching this goal was no coincidence
Effort and will were the keys
Obviously I answered my own pleas
The scar on my heart will always be there
And now I have no fear
I laugh whenever I see his picture
I know I have a better future
I never look back or regret my past
All I know is that I'm making happy memories that will last
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Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 11:47 am
Little bird
I like the beginning. The reiteration of the first line really enforces the mood and tone and aids the emotion. <3 Hush your mouth.
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Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:07 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:35 am
once again i love your poem, my bf and i just ended a week ago after 2 1/2 years of being together he left me, but its what i wanted he always hurt me and put me down and i was dying alittle more each day but when i started tothink about things i knew i needed out, and now im free and can try to be happy, the reason why im telling you all this is cuz this poem made me think of me and how i use to hurt so much, and how over time things can and will get better
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 10:03 am
princess Tsukasa once again i love your poem, my bf and i just ended a week ago after 2 1/2 years of being together he left me, but its what i wanted he always hurt me and put me down and i was dying alittle more each day but when i started tothink about things i knew i needed out, and now im free and can try to be happy, the reason why im telling you all this is cuz this poem made me think of me and how i use to hurt so much, and how over time things can and will get better well i'm sure everything will get better, if u werent completely happy with him i think u would be happier without him smile
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