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Alright, so I wrote this up, and I was wondering if this would be good to place inside the guild Demon. If so, then please let me know where you would like to place it!

Thank you all!

Mama Kat



At a time, this world that we know today was very different. All the dimensions were connected together and in peace and at one with each other. There were inter-race marriages, species of all kinds living in the dimensions as neighbors, that wouldn’t dare live next to each other in our current time. But that was before the war, the Great War that separated the powerful angels and the hellions from each other. Once those two separated and took their own ways, they demanded differences set forth upon their lands. Once done, the hatred equally shared between the two spread for generations upon generations to come.



Allow me to talk about what life was like before the war, what was happening to allow such peace, and how close to a merge of the two very different races was at one point. We won’t go back to the very beginning of time, of when the dimensions started, but instead when the third king of Hell reigned. With his rule, the lands of Heaven and Hell became close. The king of that time was Anid Devolin, a powerful man with deep red hair and an attitude in a half. He took up the throne when he was only seven years of age. Seeing the princes of the angelic lands, Anid fell in love with the lovely Aravin. With their acceptance of each other the two lands grew even closer. That is until Aravin went missing.



The angelic race was pointing fingers at the hellions, stating that it was just like a hellion to do such a thing, and that they knew Lady Aravin’s choice was wrong. She had become queen and had accepted the wedding proposal from Anid before her capture. Anid was devastated and his efforts to search for her were blocked by the feather winged creatures. Hatred started to brew inside the hellion king, and as his one love showed up dead in the Angelic lands, everything fell apart between the two lands as Anid was hateful making harsh statements against the angels out of the pain he had left inside of him. Events started to happen to the king, as he had to remarry to gain an heir to the thrown of hell. He watched as Aravin’s little brother took up the throne, and held a sour outlook upon the young man’s rule. With a long stroke of bad luck falling upon the Lord of Hell, Anid died of an early age, with an unsolved murder case. He was found ripped to shreds, believed to be attacked out of hatred. Seeing such a thing, and jumping to conclusions, Anid's eldest son took the throne with a cold shoulder for the angels, and demanded a new defense against them to keep them out of hell. With this new demand upon Hell’s kind, the lord of Heaven also demanded a new defense. Both lands now were different and complete opposites of each other, each one with their own defense against the other. Heaven became light and beautiful, with their air toxic to the hellions. As the Hellions buried themselves in their own heat, and barren lands arose with hell’s grounds hungry for any angelic creature that came down and was not allowed by the king to do so. The ground of Hell would literally rip the angel’s wings apart so they could not return to Heaven, and then devour the angelic being, feeding the energy to the core of Hell.



Years of hateful words and pitiful attacks came until a mix up accord and a full onslaught was committed in Hell’s grounds. Finding proof on angelic weaponry and feathers, the hellions blamed them right away, not looking into what really happen. If they had, they would of found that the angels were framed by those that grew tired and wanted some entertainment. None other then those young new gods, and their followers, just messing with the mortals for mere entertainment, and ended up starting a war with the two races. Thousands lost their lives, and several lines of the kings raged this hateful war as it continued for almost four hundred years. The war finally came to an end, as two new kings came up, and they settled the argument with a peace treaty between the two lands. The agreement was for only the royals and assigned workers to have safe passage between, and even that had its limitations. The hellions were still affected by the angelic air, but it was made so if they came and kept a relaxed form, any royal or worker with hellion blood could make it for a couple of hours with out any more then a mere cough coming up. The angels were the same way, although it wasn't the hellion air they had to worry about, but rather the hellion's land. A royal of the angelic land or an assigned worker could stay in the hellion's realm only for a short time before the ground would start attacking them.

And so the two races lived for hundreds of years. Until two main liners decided to have a small get together and have a child. This child however, would carry the blood of both lines, creating that bond between the two races Lord Anid and Lady Aravin would of had if her majesty did not die before giving birth to the pore child she bore at her time of death. Now the lands deal with this connection between being hellion and being angelic. Is there really that much of a difference between the two races? Or is it just a fear of the other that they have been taught to have? But along side these two main races, the other species that were dragged in to the war are now aiding or fighting against this new development in the deeply seeded enragement of the Angels and Hellions. The Dragons have had a close connection to the hellions, and now find themselves making an even closer connection as the young double lined prince has just accepting the wedding proposal of the dragon lord. With this marriage, three lines will be united. With more potential for growth, as the young dragon prince has found love in a Vampire Queen, who doubles as a reaper.

Along side the death of the Shaman Hathern, the species learn how to survive without the old man giving them knowledge of what to do, and of how to accept the other race correctly. The workers and the people of both lands will soon learn what life was like before the Great War, and get a taste of the peace that once was established between the two lands of higher and lower beings.

-I might add more on to it. XD-

I think it was awesome! ( It had a few spelling mistakes, but I already corrected those. xD ) Yeah, so....It's really good, and as Onion said, it should go on the home page.

This usually is a pet peeve of mine, but you can choose to regard it or not. Usually most experienced writers avoid this phrase to flow more smoothly.

Never say things like "allow me to tell you this" or "this is how it all began" or "I am going to tell you".

Also, avoid fragmentation unless you mean to emphasize a strong point.

(: "And so the two races lived for hundreds of years. Until two main liners decided to have a small get together and have a child." Instead of sounding smooth, it simply chops up the thought, and really, it doesn't sound strong enough for fragmentation. If you'd like to continue using fragmentation, phrase it in a less awkward way. Otherwise, just join the sentences.

Aside from that, works well for plot summary (: