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 Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:43 pm
i rlly want to be an author when i grow up. ok, now i will begin a story.
The Ancient Crystals part 1
Chapetr 1: the royal baby knight
One day, there lived a family of knights. The royal knights....These
knights were brave and strong they could do anything. They helped their own
village and protected it from harm. One day, this royal knight, a boy, loved a
girl from his village, chose her to be his wife in the future.The girl
accepted it and .... the boy who was 8 became 17 and ran away from the
village with his wife who was a new knight. The other royal knights
couldn't believe what he had done. Then another day after that day, one
of the knights got married and had a kid, a healthy baby boy.This knight
promised he would teach him great things. When the baby grew to a 5
year old boy, he helped his father and the other royal knight. He was too
obedient. He made a friend, who was 4 years younger than he was. A
baby? This baby was a regular person not belonging to any royal. The
parents of the baby Envied the boy who had loved their baby very much.
One day, the parents asked the knights if they could have them set the
baby as one of the knights.The royal knights accepted and the boy was
happy.The baby learned how to walk and hold a small sword.The boy
taught him how to eat, and how to drink, and how he should be guarding
his own town.Then, 10 days past and the village was burning up. The
parents who had died were gone.A royal knight told the boy, Ren, to take
the baby knight who was now named Kaoru. Ren obeyed but by the time
he had grabbed Kaoru, Kaoru's real parents had died.Who would have
done this?Then Ren's father told him a path to go to and to never come
back to the village again.Why? Ren was only angry and grew despair and
started to grab Kaoru and left.His father was happy but he had so much to
learn. Soon after that, the knight who had ran away had seen the village
burned in despair. Oh how he wished to rebuild it. He knew the boy and
Kaoru ran away and set out to look for them.
>.< im bad!! oh well! have a fun time anyways!
bumpity bump bump 1!
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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:08 am
Chapter 2:The aching heart
A few days after the run away, young Ren was tired and Kaoru
crying. After while, they slept ...fled into a deep dark sleep.After Kaoru fell
asleep, it happened. Kaoru grew fear from the death of his parents..and
began to lose controll. Why? Kaoru has lost his real parents and drowned into
a deep dark hole..deeply sleeping like for eternity.Kaoru started to breathe
so fast, his heart beated and beated. Ren woke up and saw Kaoru suffering.
So young Ren got up, carried Kaoru to the next vllage.Indeed he was wearing
an armor that was now dirty.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:37 pm
Ren was afraid but as a young boy, he wanted to be his father. Determined to win! but his heart ached. What was wrong? What did happen?
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