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Rinaru Misoto / Rogue shinigami

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Shintei Shinzer0

PostPosted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:45 pm


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Name:
Rinaru Misoto

Aliases/ Nicknames:
Rin

Age:
Looks 23, actually 600

Seat:
Former 2nd Division Fukutaichou

Height:
6'2
Weight:
190
Personality:
He is generally self spoken and quiet when he isn’t around people he trusts. However, he has no problem speaking out against something he doesn’t believe in, or something he feels is a lie. He is generally respectful to everyone, even his enemies, and his speech reflects that. He will even respect his enemies strength when it is greater, or their effort when they are defeated.
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Physical Description:
he alwasys stands tall with his chin up, because he thinks that starring down is a sign of slyness or underhanedness, and he doesn't believe in that. He still wears the Traditional Shinigami black wardrobe, along with a pair of sandals. His hair is short and black not going to far past his ears, so that it will stay out of his face easier when he is attacking.

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description:
his Zanpuktou spirit is N'kai, and sealed he takes on the shape of a Tachi. N’Kai, resembles that of a Chimera, the mythical Tri –beast that was only told of in legends. The Feline head represents his swift and cunning, the ram head represents steadfast and endurance, and the dragon head represents perserverance and heart. From his Zanpakutou he gains the wisdom and spirituality, that the essence of all three will lead him to infinite strength. The three combined together give Rinaru the ability to manipulate momentum pressure around him. Defensively (Ram) he is able to use it to create a density within the air, making travel for others difficult, through support (Lion) he is able to manipulate his own momentum to increase his movements, as well as movements of things in his hands, and offensively (Dragon) He is able to increase the momentum of his Limbs, giving the illusion that he is 20 times stronger than what he really is…just the illusion feels real.

Zanpaku-to Sword Type: Tachi is the form that N'kai uses while sealed and is Melee based. It normally stays sheathed, and Rin only grabs the hilt if he needs to use its Reiatsu powers. he only fights with the sword if it is absolutely necessary

Zanpaku-to Element:
N'kai's element is more so Kido based, as it is one that manipulates inertia to an extent, so it is a pressure element. The sword is constantly vibrating ever so slightly, and when it is sheathed, the vibrations are barely noticable by Rinaru. Unsheathed, and the sword vibrates like a cell phone constantly. this is because it uses that vibration to have movement to convert to reiatsu. Also, this effect can be used to speed up or slow down the air particles around the sword to create a pressurized effect, making it dense air that can do physical damage.

Shikai:
"Heart, Mind, and Brawn, I am reborn, N’Kai"

In his Shikai release, his zanpakutou actually transforms from the sheath on his back, Metal like bandages wrapped on his arms from around his hand up to his elbow, and around his lower legs from around his feet to just under his knees. this wrap over takes his pants so they will not appear as baggy as they do in picture, for easier movement. his other physical appearances do not actually change beyond that, but the increase in pressure and reiatsu control will definitely be noticed. His Shikai techniques:

Shinrekku-ryo: Building Momentum pressure in his arms, he is able to channel that withheld energy and focus it to an offensive, very disruptive pressure wave that travels along the gorund. This wave carries a lot of friction heat, and can demolish objects that can’t withstand it.

Shinrekku-suyo: the same method as Shinrekku-ryo, except it is pressure released by kicking, and the waves are airbourne, and easier to aim.

Shinrekku-garuke: This technique uses his entire body to build up pressure, which he then releases in the air to create a dense, high pressure field around his body. While he can move freely within and out of the field, anything trapped inside will slow to a crawl due to the density of the air particles, allowing him to react accordingly. At this stage he cannot have the field follow him, it stays in one place.

Bankai:
"Setsunai Haisupi-do N'Kai" (Suffocating High Speed)
His bankai Release, His Zanpakutou forms into the bracers on his arms and legs and they turn to a brighter silver, and extend slightly past his hands and past his knees, almost giving him added offensive power to his fist and knee strikes. He can also increase his control over momentum pressure 3 fold. This increase in Reiatsu control mainly affects his person, and not the motion of those around him.Full metal arm braces that wrap from the back of his hand, and actually extend slightly passed his elbows, and from the top of his feet, covering his lower leg completely, and extending slightly above his knees.
the extensions on those joints do not connect to the body so he retains free movement of the elbows and knees, but provide added defense in guarding, or a slight edge when attacking.
the metal that the Zanpakutou transforms to is nearly indestructable by conventional means of course, but that does not in anyway prevent him from feeling pain under it. it just means that he won't break a bone that easily. Additional Techniques:

Shorekku-gi: This is what is called a pressure step. With the pressure step, it is similar to the common flash step technique with a twist. A force momentum pressure wave is released as soon as he flash steps, knocking his opponent off balance unless they are guarding.

Shorekku-garuken: this is similar to the Shinrekku-garuke, except the field stays around him like an aura. This field last as long as he is defending himself. Once he launches an offensive attack, the field is dispearsed in a radial Shinrekku-ryo.

Absolute: The simplicity of this name brings out the full strength of the mighty Chimera. Mind, heart, and body combine to create a pressure attack strong enough to be considered an environmental hazard. This pressure is so dense that any normal creature will suffocate when if they get caught in the beam. The three heads combine, the Ram reinforces his back with a pressure shield, the lion builds the energy in 15 seconds, and the Dragon launches the immense density attack in a forward fan, unleashing the Chimera on all in the way.



Kidou:
see other
Bakudo: see other
Hado: see other
Other: Shunko (flash cry) the only technique he learned as a shinigami in the 2nd division.

Skills:
Shunpo master (flash step)
High speed Melee fighter.
High Skilled Kendo artist
High Reiatsu (somewhere between Ichigo and kenpachi to compare)

Bio:
An unkown land is what gave birth to Rinaru, and his family run clan of Ninja-esque warriors known as N’kaiste. They all believed in a spirit by the name of N’Kai, whom they worshiped as the beind of all creation. As a child, Rinaru was raised with exteme discipline, but with extreme care at the same time. His father was a warrior and field general for his countries army, and he knew that sooner or later, he was destined to take over the role that his father was holding. He always looked up to his father, how strong he was, and how well he commanded the army of N’Kai. His only issue was why his father used a sword. Though he was being trained by his father, he refused to use a weapon. No bow, no staff, no sword…..nothing. His mother understood, and had to explain to his father why he refused, so that way he would be infuriated. “ He likes to know the strength of his body increased, and not just the techniques of his weapons. I think I like our son to flourish better this way. It was no way that he would argue the word of his own wife, so he continued to train his young sons body to its limits.

The martial art form they practice was called Shinrekkuraporu. It is a discipline that focuses on the strengths of N’kai. Being in tune with the mind, the heart, and the body, teaching fast reflexes and swiftness of the feline, the endurance and steadfast of the ram, and the fury and strength of the Dragon. It is a skill that also focuses on swift attack and counter moves, basically waiting for “the right moment.” Rinaru was showing his father that he was taking to the discipline very well, in fact, he was adapting faster, and at a younger age than his father, having mastered Shinrekkuraporu by age 14. It was at this point that He learned from his father about a quest that few warriors have sought out. The shrine of N’kai has never been breached by human beings….ever.

This quest involved things that none of them had ever seen before, but the reward was the gauntlets of the hunter, which allowed them to be chosen to defend the honor of N’kai. He didn’t finish the Journey for 10 years of his life. The fighting in several wars his country encountered, the many stops for injuries he had to take, and the battles with several beings that he had never seen before……This is because what he was fighting were known as Hollows, and what he had learned about his tribe, were that they were all fighters who could see these creatures, and they were the only ones who could defend against them. Amungst all of the other warriors, Rinaru was the most promising, but what he didn't know, was that this trial he was put through was different from the others, and that he had been watched most of the time by the Gotei 13. Rinaru actually died at the very end of his trial from his injuries, but he was recruited to the Soul Society by Kiyen Kurata, who at the time was the 2nd Division 3rd Seat. this is where Rinaru was Revived in the Seireitei began his long eduation thought the Soul Academy, where he was shaping up to be something promising.

As Rinaru was accelerating through the Academy, Kiyen was climbing in rank in the 2nd division. Ironically enough, rinaru was a graduate and placed in the 2nd division as a 4th seat, around the same time Kiyen became Captain, and it was here, under his new captains training, that he was able to ascend in a similar fashion that Kiyen had, and became his Vice Captain. Where the only thing he need now was to learn his bankai. He had reached almost the full potential of his shikai and he wanted more...but before he could confront his captain about it, Word spread that he had left the Gotei 13. the Captain spot could have been his had he met the 1 requirement that he hadn't gotten...Bankai. It was because of this, and the fact that not too many other captains were willing to train him, that he left the Gotei 13 himself in search of his former captain, to continue toutolage under Kyen....
PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 3:21 pm


There are a few problems with your profile. First, you will basically start off with nothing but your zanpakuto and kido 1-10. You won't have shunpo or shunko. Since you want to be a rogue but are going to be starting out with nothing I would suggest that you join the Sereitei and go rogue later once you have achieved the level of power you want. You will be starting off as a fresh shinigami so you won't be able to keep anything about how your character was once in squad 2 since he technically hasn't joined a squad yet, that includes powers obtained in the squad and anything that you have in the bio that concerns this as well. Also, in your zanpakuto sealed description your talk about the some powers it possesses. In its sealed form a zanpakuto doesn't have any power, though you can keep those abilities you will just need to move them to the shikai form. Your shikai itself seems fine to me. Your bankai is fine for the most part, though the last attack in the list, Absolute, seems a little godmoddish since if it is successful it suffocates the opponent. It would be fine if the pressure made it hard to breath for a limited amount of time, but to fully suffocate someone is a little too much. The last issue would be in the skills section, apart from the shunpo mastery which I discussed earlier, it states that he has high reaitsu near Ichigo or Kenpachi. That would mean he was at the same power level as a captain so please remove it from the profile. For the most part this is a good profile just a few issue that shouldn't take too long to fix. Fix the issues and do a little spell check cause there are a few errors I noticed (though that is just me being a little too picky). Once you have edited it just post that you fixed the problems and I will look over it.

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Shintei Shinzer0

PostPosted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 4:40 pm


To clarify, the skill Absolute, i can see how i worded it was a little unclear. I mentioned that a normal being would suffocate. Shinigami, Arrancars, etc, are not normal beings. I meant for the hard to breath part to be implied, but i will change it word for word.

So pretty much i have to completely change his bio then. If i am going to start that low, i surely hope the 2nd division is active enough for me to get strong.

I will let you know when i am finished with the changes
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