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 Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 8:07 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:14 pm
Good profile...
but there are some things that need to be corrected.
Starting Shinigami have Kidou [Bakudou and Hadou] 1-10.
Unless she is of 4th seat and above, she wouldn't have the airwalk..
The reiatsu bit is a little off putting. =/ Especially for a new shinigami...
@A@
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Heavenly Floetic Sins Crew
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:29 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:14 pm
^^;;
One more thing
-->•Tenmō Kagizaki (天網鉤裂き, Heaven's Vengeance Rip) Aki takes the sheer power of the bankai and compresses it into a new blade (daikatana) ____that unleashes a massive surge of energy that rivals a Cero Oscuras in power upon swinging it. If Muma is released while the nodachi is formed, ____the power is channeled into the Tenmō, increasing in power by 1.5. This technique is a precursor to Muma Okori and Encompassing Black Magic.
This attack is a bit overpowered, especially for a Bankai state. I'm sorry that I didn't meantion it before but -scratches- yeah. If you can tone this down a bit, it will be great.
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Heavenly Floetic Sins Crew
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:18 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:30 pm
Everything seems fine. Accepted.
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Deathgod Kuro Kihaku Captain
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