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 Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:10 pm
~User Data~
Name: Holland Sebastian Siegfried
Nicknames: Black Rose
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Birth Date: October 22nd
Highschool Level: Senior, works somewhat as a butler at his family's mansion.
History: Holland was born and raised on a very expansive plot of land. He had a loving mother, a stern father, and 3 playful sisters. After his father died, Holland took up care of the mansion, acting as a caretaker of sorts for his mother. His handsome looks always have the ladies turn their heads to see him walk by. Somewhat of a goth, but he is very kind.
Family: Mother, three sisters.
Magic Specailty: Aiding/Self-Protection
Element: Shadow
Personality: Calm-minded and soft-hearted, with a sense of discipline.
~Appearance~
Height: 6"3'
Weight: 106 lbs
Hair: Dark blue, medium-cut.
Eyes: Baby blue, they were originally deep-blue
Clothing: Holland mostly wears an black dress-suit, with a darkblue cloak over it.
Physical Description: 
Magic Crest: ((This is where you magic crest appears.)) Command Spell: ((location of your command spell aka the proof that you are a master)) Explain to me the Magic Crest and Command Spell before I finish this. Is the magic crest supposed to be a picture or description of what it looks like? And... My Command Spell...the way it is described, it confused me in a certain way, please explain a little further. Sorry for the sudden change of character, the servant thing got too crazy and hectic for me to understand.
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 5:55 pm
Um you don't want any noble phantasms??
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Ventro Ketsueki Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:03 pm
Someone would have to explain more as to what a Noble Phantasm is used for. That and at the time I made this profile, I had to rush-job it so I didn't have enough time to make a good sample. If you wanted me to make a sample, I can say it'd probably be somewhat high ranked.
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Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 12:49 am
First of all, if you're playing a Servant, they need to be a heroic spirit. Someone well-known is generally more powerful. For example, take Hercules. Everyone knows Hercules. Hercules as a result is a badass. Who really knows about Medea though? Hence why she dies. Always. >.>
Noble Phantasms! These are the "signature moves" of a Servant. What's the first thing you think of when you think of King Arthur? Excalibur! That's what most Noble Phantasms are. They have incredible magical power, but using them requires you call out it's name. So if someone survives they know who to research to find the weakness for.
For example, Lancer from FSN used Gae Bolg. The wielder of Gae Bolg in life was Cuchulain. Cuchulain had a geas (think a compulsion) placed on him to be killed by the wielder of the sword Caladbolg. So, if you knew who he was, you could find his weakness and...
That should help. razz
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 6:23 pm
I don't fully understand this whole well-known thing? I thought the basics of a non-private RP were to create your own characters...? If theres anything wrong with my profile in general, could someone tell me straight-up, which part is wrong and how to change it? Otherwise, please accept it.
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:59 pm
What Mvid is saying, is you have to change your character to someone known in history or myth. A heroic spirit was someone who did good for the world during their lifetime, enough for them to make a place in history. That means that if you are to be a servant, it has to be someone that is well-known by the general public. (Tho, sorry mvid, but to counter that thought of 'more well-known is more powerful,' gilgamesh was one of the strongest servants, much stronger than heracles (noted by the fact he slaughtered him in... i think it was UBW) and he is much less well-known than the majority of the servants shown in the series, if you want to be a powerful servant, choose someone who had the skills while in their lifetime. Medea had none. so she died like a sucker xp ) There are hundreds of well-known heroes that you could choose from... pick your favorite mythological hero... and be them. Also, since the Holy Grail was polluted in the third Holy Grail War (right, we are gonig by that, since we have a fair amount of evil servants in this guild), you could pick an anti-hero... (seriously tho, how did medusa help humanity at all?) like Mordred or Gunnar
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Saraba Kokyou Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:29 am
Right, well thanks for explaining it. I understand almost completely now. However, I went ahead and remade my profile. I'm gonna be a master.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:31 am
Approved once you get your cres,t and yes it is what it looks like just use a pic, and then put the area for each.
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Ventro Ketsueki Vice Captain
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