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PostPosted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:11 pm


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Name: Spiral Haruto
Aliases/ Nicknames: Spiral Top
Age: 16
Seat: n/a
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 116 lbs.
Personality: He is very easy going on all subject matters that call his attention outside of battle. In battle, he doesn't rush in head first. he prefers to analyze his opponent and attack from a moderately close or far distance. once again outside of battle, he is very sociable with other shinigami. He has a goal of becoming lieutenant to the captain of Squad 11
Theme Song(s): STRENGTH by Abingdon Boys School
Physical Description: At first glance, he doesn't look like much with his physical appearance, but he has great muscle strength built for stamina. His arm strength is relatively impressive as he can lift 100 lbs easily onto one arm. His hair is dark brown with a slight red-ish tint. His eye color is pitch black and oddly reflective. Although, he always wears sunglasses with violet lenses. He also like to wear a very light grey, sleeveless, coat with spiral designs on the front left and right shoulders, on the bottom left and right side, and one large one on his back. Inside the coat is the roman numeral for eleven

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: kanjo ah boufuu (spiral of the windstorms) the zanpakuto is or average length and width. The color of the hilt is gray and white. The blade is pure silver of color itself. The guard looks like a two pronged type of windmill design.
Zanpakuto Spirit: http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z5/dialomon/spiralprincess.png
Zanpaku-to Sword Type: A normal Zanpakuto
Zanpaku-to Element: wind

Shikai: twirl, Kanjo joou! User Image The Spinner is the size of his whole left arm and is held in his right hand by one of the blades. When it is thrown, it spins at speeds up to 100 mph. Like a boomerang, it always comes back when thrown
Bankai: Spiral through the heavens! Kanzen Kanjo joou (Perfect Spiral Queen) User Image This version of the Spinner is as tall as his whole body and weighs as light as a feather only to him, if it is caught in mid throw by another entity with equal or higher spiritual pressure, it will weigh 200 lbs. When thrown, the cord attached to the middle can extend to 57 meters and is indestructible. At the end of this cord is another weapon for self defense. The main spinner can spin at up to 200 mph. It always comes back to him when he pulls on the cord. The wind force worked up by it being thrown is enough to clear a one meter wide path in a forest.


Skills: He is exceptionally Talented in long distance running.
Bio: He was born and raised in the east rukon district and entered the soul reaper academy at the request of his father, who wanted him to become a well known soul reaper so he could selfishly brag to those around town. Spiral himself had always wanted to be a soul reaper and was glad to go to the soul reaper academy despite his father's selfish intentions. During his childhood, he was rather good at sports, he had a habit of putting a furious spin on every shot no matter what kind of ball or game. He mostly spent his time staring at the wall that separated the rukon district from the seiretei. When he managed to form the binding contract with his zanpakuto spirit, he became infatuated with her. He would never admit this to anyone else though.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:23 pm



Very interesting. There are just two things that you need to fix up.
First, you should list out a couple attacks/abilities that you gain in your Shikai and Bankai states. You can add more as you go on, but we need some sort of example as to what you want it to do. But if all you want to have it do is just to be thrown as a weapon that always comes back, that's fine as well.
The other is your bio, which is extremely lacking. Even if you are a soul born in the SS, you still have some sort of story. What kind of problems did you have in your childhood? What sort of things did you accomplish in the academy that defines you character? Are your parent's still alive? Things like that.
Just post when you have finished with these things and we'll see.





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PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:43 pm


ok, i edited it
PostPosted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:12 pm



Just remember that you don't start off with your Shikai or your Bankai.

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