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"Obsessive Much?"

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:59 pm


"Obsessive Much?"
Written by Sarah
Date: 12/09/09

I feel like I am being stalked
Obviously he doesn't know the meaning
Of stay away from me, it's completely over
My ex boyfriend seems not to listen to
My friends plain English and my body language
He stares and won't look away
Listens to my conversations with my friends
Walks by me over and over again, looking lost
For absolutely no reason it seems
Is always in front, in back, or by my side at all times
Mumbles to himself every time he crosses my path
In a couple attempts, he has tried to
Trigger my emotions of jealousy and guiltiness
This only attracted a stronger flame to
Burn the little bridge between us
I don't give out second chances easily but
In his case, another chance is not in his cards
With every stare, the option of try-again
Gets slimmer and slimmer
He needs to learn that I will not change my mind
And desperately needs to grow up into a big boy
His maturity is at subzero
There's no doubt in my stubborn mind that
He will not take this manly and remain obsessive
When I feel stalked, there's a high chance that
He is unconsciously or consciously stalking me
Therefore if I feel it, it most likely is a reality
PostPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 2:45 am


I like the way the poem sounds a bit like a story.
He sounds really stalkerish O_o

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:07 am


Sarah aka Vampire Girl
"Obsessive Much?"
Written by Sarah
Date: 12/09/09

I feel like I am being stalked
Obviously he doesn't know the meaning
Of stay away from me, it's completely over
My ex boyfriend seems not to listen to
My friends plain English and my body language
He stares and won't look away
Listens to my conversations with my friends
Walks by me over and over again, looking lost
For absolutely no reason it seems
Is always in front, in back, or by my side at all times
Mumbles to himself every time he crosses my path
In a couple attempts, he has tried to
Trigger my emotions of jealousy and guiltiness
This only attracted a stronger flame to
Burn the little bridge between us
I don't give out second chances easily but
In his case, another chance is not in his cards
With every stare, the option of try-again
Gets slimmer and slimmer
He needs to learn that I will not change my mind
And desperately needs to grow up into a big boy
His maturity is at subzero
There's no doubt in my stubborn mind that
He will not take this manly and remain obsessive
When I feel stalked, there's a high chance that
He is unconsciously or consciously stalking me
Therefore if I feel it, it most likely is a reality


My dear, Sarah, as always a lovely poem, with a darker topic to it, and it is indeed a stalker from what you say.
 
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