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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:16 pm
Post any story you think rocks or a link to it I will review it
I will add some of my teaser stories
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:45 pm
any story ok here alittle about the twilight/new moon saga i like: Twilight is very good it has vampires,were wolves in new moon,and bella loves eddward edward leaves becasue he thought it was the right thing to do for his true love bella.
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Xx_kearstyn_zalonka_xX Crew
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:52 pm
Xx_kearstyn_zalonka_xX any story ok here alittle about the twilight/new moon saga i like: Twilight is very good it has vampires,were wolves in new moon,and bella loves eddward edward leaves becasue he thought it was the right thing to do for his true love bella. cool i havent read it though but here is a good one
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:53 pm
Teaser Story #2 You Gotta be Fast
The roar of the booster as the unknown human like mech blazes through the streets of Feline City. The pounding of two legged walkers as they intercept the unknown attacker. One catches a glimpse of the attacker, as it zooms by. "What was that," a tigerian says as he sees it zooms by him. "I don't know what it is, but its not friendly," Lt. Graygon says, "Pursue and destroy." The unknown mech turns at high speed, unleashing a hail of bullets. It disappears into a alley, the walker it fires at is killed instantly. "How something that big move through streets like it is nothing," a tigerian yells as he makes contact with the mech. He fires at it, but it uses it side boosters to slide into an ally. It reappears from behind, catching the tigerian off guard. The mech fires the guns it holds in its hands. The tigerian mech haul is ripped to pieces and falls. The tigerian tries to use his mech to flee, but when the tigerian looks into the front sensors of his view screen. To his horror, the enemy mech is reading for the kill shot. The poor tigerian is looking down the barrel of unknown enemy. He notices the wolf empire markings on it chest plate. "Sir, its from the wolf empire. Tell my family I love them," the last words of the tigerian over the headset. The next thing that follows is a loud thunderous bang and the dead silence of radio static. The unknown mech continues through the streets, killing the puny tiger walkers. Lt. Graygon explodes out of a building, in his equally matched White Claw mech. Two titans, one showdown, coming soon.
To be continued
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Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 8:11 am
POPCORN FOR SALE!!! Said a sign. "awesome! Lets get the popcorn" POPCORN FOR SALE!!! Said another sign. (this is a short story)"Well tht was a rip off!!!!!!!!!!!!" Said the fat boy. " Yeah tht was a rip off."
THE NEXT DAY...
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! VIDEO GAMES FOR FREEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "Yahoo!!!" Siad skinny boy. "I think they have NINJA WARRIORS for free!!!!"
FOR THE NEXT HOUR OR TWO... "DANG,why does everything hav to be so expensive!" Said the fat boy.THE END
P.S IT's only 2$ for the popcorn!!!!!! AND the video games were 10$
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2010 9:26 pm
Chubbs The Dubz Teaser Story #2 You Gotta be Fast The roar of the booster as the unknown human like mech blazes through the streets of Feline City. The pounding of two legged walkers as they intercept the unknown attacker. One catches a glimpse of the attacker, as it zooms by. "What was that," a tigerian says as he sees it zooms by him. "I don't know what it is, but its not friendly," Lt. Graygon says, "Pursue and destroy." The unknown mech turns at high speed, unleashing a hail of bullets. It disappears into a alley, the walker it fires at is killed instantly. "How something that big move through streets like it is nothing," a tigerian yells as he makes contact with the mech. He fires at it, but it uses it side boosters to slide into an ally. It reappears from behind, catching the tigerian off guard. The mech fires the guns it holds in its hands. The tigerian mech haul is ripped to pieces and falls. The tigerian tries to use his mech to flee, but when the tigerian looks into the front sensors of his view screen. To his horror, the enemy mech is reading for the kill shot. The poor tigerian is looking down the barrel of unknown enemy. He notices the wolf empire markings on it chest plate. "Sir, its from the wolf empire. Tell my family I love them," the last words of the tigerian over the headset. The next thing that follows is a loud thunderous bang and the dead silence of radio static. The unknown mech continues through the streets, killing the puny tiger walkers. Lt. Graygon explodes out of a building, in his equally matched White Claw mech. Two titans, one showdown, coming soon. To be continued scream you evil son-of-a-biznitch you removed my story that meant alot to me, you evil evil person, this means war
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 6:29 am
Drexel Galbitor Chubbs The Dubz Teaser Story #2 You Gotta be Fast The roar of the booster as the unknown human like mech blazes through the streets of Feline City. The pounding of two legged walkers as they intercept the unknown attacker. One catches a glimpse of the attacker, as it zooms by. "What was that," a tigerian says as he sees it zooms by him. "I don't know what it is, but its not friendly," Lt. Graygon says, "Pursue and destroy." The unknown mech turns at high speed, unleashing a hail of bullets. It disappears into a alley, the walker it fires at is killed instantly. "How something that big move through streets like it is nothing," a tigerian yells as he makes contact with the mech. He fires at it, but it uses it side boosters to slide into an ally. It reappears from behind, catching the tigerian off guard. The mech fires the guns it holds in its hands. The tigerian mech haul is ripped to pieces and falls. The tigerian tries to use his mech to flee, but when the tigerian looks into the front sensors of his view screen. To his horror, the enemy mech is reading for the kill shot. The poor tigerian is looking down the barrel of unknown enemy. He notices the wolf empire markings on it chest plate. "Sir, its from the wolf empire. Tell my family I love them," the last words of the tigerian over the headset. The next thing that follows is a loud thunderous bang and the dead silence of radio static. The unknown mech continues through the streets, killing the puny tiger walkers. Lt. Graygon explodes out of a building, in his equally matched White Claw mech. Two titans, one showdown, coming soon. To be continued scream you evil son-of-a-biznitch you removed my story that meant alot to me, you evil evil person, this means war hay dont you realize that the creater of this guild your talking to ((well his old account))
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 8:17 am
zakuro the forgoten Drexel Galbitor Chubbs The Dubz Teaser Story #2 You Gotta be Fast The roar of the booster as the unknown human like mech blazes through the streets of Feline City. The pounding of two legged walkers as they intercept the unknown attacker. One catches a glimpse of the attacker, as it zooms by. "What was that," a tigerian says as he sees it zooms by him. "I don't know what it is, but its not friendly," Lt. Graygon says, "Pursue and destroy." The unknown mech turns at high speed, unleashing a hail of bullets. It disappears into a alley, the walker it fires at is killed instantly. "How something that big move through streets like it is nothing," a tigerian yells as he makes contact with the mech. He fires at it, but it uses it side boosters to slide into an ally. It reappears from behind, catching the tigerian off guard. The mech fires the guns it holds in its hands. The tigerian mech haul is ripped to pieces and falls. The tigerian tries to use his mech to flee, but when the tigerian looks into the front sensors of his view screen. To his horror, the enemy mech is reading for the kill shot. The poor tigerian is looking down the barrel of unknown enemy. He notices the wolf empire markings on it chest plate. "Sir, its from the wolf empire. Tell my family I love them," the last words of the tigerian over the headset. The next thing that follows is a loud thunderous bang and the dead silence of radio static. The unknown mech continues through the streets, killing the puny tiger walkers. Lt. Graygon explodes out of a building, in his equally matched White Claw mech. Two titans, one showdown, coming soon. To be continued scream you evil son-of-a-biznitch you removed my story that meant alot to me, you evil evil person, this means war hay dont you realize that the creater of this guild your talking to ((well his old account)) She has a point. You shouldnt talk to a captain like that. ninja
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Raspi-Cherri Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 3:34 pm
Sparky Kitsune zakuro the forgoten Drexel Galbitor Chubbs The Dubz Teaser Story #2 You Gotta be Fast The roar of the booster as the unknown human like mech blazes through the streets of Feline City. The pounding of two legged walkers as they intercept the unknown attacker. One catches a glimpse of the attacker, as it zooms by. "What was that," a tigerian says as he sees it zooms by him. "I don't know what it is, but its not friendly," Lt. Graygon says, "Pursue and destroy." The unknown mech turns at high speed, unleashing a hail of bullets. It disappears into a alley, the walker it fires at is killed instantly. "How something that big move through streets like it is nothing," a tigerian yells as he makes contact with the mech. He fires at it, but it uses it side boosters to slide into an ally. It reappears from behind, catching the tigerian off guard. The mech fires the guns it holds in its hands. The tigerian mech haul is ripped to pieces and falls. The tigerian tries to use his mech to flee, but when the tigerian looks into the front sensors of his view screen. To his horror, the enemy mech is reading for the kill shot. The poor tigerian is looking down the barrel of unknown enemy. He notices the wolf empire markings on it chest plate. "Sir, its from the wolf empire. Tell my family I love them," the last words of the tigerian over the headset. The next thing that follows is a loud thunderous bang and the dead silence of radio static. The unknown mech continues through the streets, killing the puny tiger walkers. Lt. Graygon explodes out of a building, in his equally matched White Claw mech. Two titans, one showdown, coming soon. To be continued scream you evil son-of-a-biznitch you removed my story that meant alot to me, you evil evil person, this means war hay dont you realize that the creater of this guild your talking to ((well his old account)) She has a point. You shouldnt talk to a captain like that. ninja I removed it cause it violated the TOS for extreme violence. I am sorry, but as captain, i must make tough decsions, i liked the story, but it still violated the rules.
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:32 pm
The World Ends With Everyone (Part 1) A TWEWY (The World Ends With You) Fan story By Sparky Kitsune A 16 year old boy walks through Tech City on a nice day through big crowded streets. His name was Teal, he was both wolf and fox. He is a bit EMO. Always wearing headphones, doesnt like to be with other people, and is in to graffiti. He goes to a big wall with a graffiti mural on it. He feels it...... DAY 1 "Ergh...." Teal wakes up in Central Street of Tech City. The place was booming with noises and people taking and cars running "Where the hell am I...huh?" Teal opens his palm and he sees a black skull pin in his hand "Where did this come from?" He flips the pin and al of a sudden he hears voices in his own head. He was hearing other peoples thoughts "W-what? OUCH!" He looks at his palm and he sees a timer. A message appears on his cell phone and he reads it "Welcome to the reapers game players. In this game you must survive and beat missions if you want to live and not get erased. There are monsters you have to fight called Noise. If you lose against them you get erased. Todays mission, get to Central Tech Tower before 40 minutes. Fail and face erasure." Teal looked at his palm and the timer was at 39:47 "I already wasted time but...just what the hell is going on here?" All of a sudden strange symbols float out of nowhere and they release noise. They were frog noise. They attack Teal "OUCH! Hey get off! Someone help! Huh? Why is everyone ignoring me? Cant they see im being attacked?" More noise comes at Teal and attack "Crap I gotta run!" TO BE CONTINUED
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Raspi-Cherri Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:08 pm
Very well writen, defainately brought something new, just needs some more back to the story, like some background, but other than that it would be a fresh new idea, and thats rare these days. Good Job Sparky.
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Posted: Tue Dec 14, 2010 8:01 pm
stare i remember not being violent at all and that story meant alot to me, that was part of my characters life and my real life and you have no idea how important that meant to me and i wanted to share that with everyone ... i respectfuly quit, i dont care how much of a furry u r, that was a jerk move, there are always more guilds out there 3nodding and maybe our paths will cross again some day maybe when im a better mood smile chow
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Raspi-Cherri Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 3:28 pm
*sigh* looks like we lost a member.
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:35 pm
The Chubbs Very well writen, defainately brought something new, just needs some more back to the story, like some background, but other than that it would be a fresh new idea, and thats rare these days. Good Job Sparky. Thanks for the compliment. I will make sure to add more background... and stuff....
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Raspi-Cherri Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:55 pm
even tho we lost a member, I have a job to do as captain, sigh, but i dont remember him ever posting anything O.o -thinks- wow I have no memory of that X_X
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