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 Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:32 pm
To join this class:
1. PM me asking to join
2. Follow these rules:
1a.You must be commited(you will write what I give you)
2a.You will turn in your work on the deadline day.
3a.Don't complain or I will have the Vice Captain or the Captain kick you out of my class.
4a. Have Fun!
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:28 pm
Ok whoever is in this class we will be writing haikus, a japanese poem.
Haiku:a major form of Japanese verse, written in 17 syllables divided into 3 lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and employing highly evocative allusions and comparisons, often on the subject of nature or one of the seasons.
Ex #1:
Hot June day --
an otter
slips into the sea
Ex #2:
Fall afternoon --
the sound of a woodpecker
tapping
This will be due by 12/18/09 aka this friday.
And I do give grades in this class. Don't worry if you get a bad grade you will NOT be kicked out of the guild its just extra RPing.
Good Luck!
Note from teacher: Sorry these haikus are slightly off.
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:30 pm
Post your work in this class do not pm me your work!
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:34 pm
Beautiful April evening --
In a barn far away.
The sound of kittens mewling.
Sliver looked around shyly. "Ummm..... how was that?" she asked quietly
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:37 pm
The syllables are off you have til friday to change it
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:37 pm
Demon Lord Origin The syllables are off you have til friday to change it Right
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 6:46 pm
Beautiful day --
Swaying flowers
A moving feild.
Sliver looks around again. "Is that any better?"
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Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:15 pm
first line is good
second line is sway-ing flow-ers is only 4 syllables it should be 7
third line A mo-ving field is also 4
it should be
5
7
5
syllables keep trying
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:31 pm
Beautiful Day --
Gently swaying flowers
A softly rolling feild
Sliver looked straight at the teacher, a feirce determination in her eyes. "Any better?"
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Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:53 pm
"You are so close last two lines are wrong."
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:18 pm
Beautiful Day --
Lovely swaying flowers
A gently swaying feild
Hows that?
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 6:20 pm
You arent good at this last too lines are too short and too long
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:55 pm
Demon Lord Origin You arent good at this last too lines are too short and too long Sliver sighed. "I'm gonna keep trying anyway."
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:56 pm
Beautiful Day --
Softly swaying flowers
Lazily moving feild "Maybe my last try I don't know pretty much all I got." Sliver sighed
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Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 7:57 pm
"I'll give you a C+ for now."
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