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 Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:16 am
I'm shy about my writing
I don't think it's very good
so I'm just gonna post one poem to start with:
My world is crashing down on me
Stifling my breath
Smothering my hopes
And my dreams
No one steps forward to help me
To help pull me from the rubble
They look on as I cry out
They whisper amongst themselves
As they turn and walk away
so what do you think?
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:28 am
I am SICK of these ******** lies 3nodding
Very uplifting. In my ******** cake!!
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:01 pm
this one's old...kinda
I'm really happy now
but am not used to writing happy stuff
I've written one so far
really nervous about showing that one
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:44 pm
Don't be shy about your writing!!!! =D I'm acually going to school to become a writer.
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Sparky_the3rd Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:10 am
i think it was great a little emo but whatever good is good
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Posted: Fri Mar 26, 2010 12:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:14 pm
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