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 Posted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 6:17 pm
(comments?)
"Angel's Spiritual Journey"
written by Sarah aka Vampire Girl
INTRO
My name is Angel Tiffany Carter, I lived with my mom, dad, 4 sisters, and baby brother. We were very rich and got everything our hearts desired. I went to a private Junior High and had the best reputation at school. I was great at every sport, in the honor choir, all advance classes and received A's in everyone, very beautiful, most popular girl, and best of all I had a wonderful boyfriend since the end of 6th grade. Of course I had haters that were jealous of my popularity. During my 8th grade promotion ceremony, a man jumped on stage and murdered me in front of my family, classmates, and the entire world! I am only a spirit now, and I was offered a chance to go to heaven but i refused because I didn't want to leave this world behind. Of course I wasn't dumb, the chance would be offered again in a couple years. I tired to comfort my dear family and tired to get revenge on my killer but I am only a ghost. Then after 5 years I figured out riddles that would change my spirit life... forever.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:28 am
Bravo, my dear. Continue with your latest work I urge. (By the way I sent you a message replying to your post about "administrators")
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Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 8:00 am
Very nice. I ESPECIALLY love the "... forever." at the end. very nice. please continue ^.^
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