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Koudoken

PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:49 pm




Senzoku Joukyuu

Age
14

Height
4'10"

Weight
101 lbs

Eye Color
Blue

Hair Color
Silver

Village
Kumogakure

Clan
Senzoku

Village Rank
Genin

Other Titles
N/A

Appearance Description
With thin and wiry muscles, Joukyuu thoroughly values speed and quickness over brute strength. Bandages usually wrap his forearms and hands as well as his shins though they are rarely visible. Joukyuu’s clothing consists of a long and loose-fitting ivory kimono and matching hakama. Its possible he chose this color to resemble his best friend and training partner, Shokaku Kaien. Joukyuu also has a small amount of body art on his right shoulder and chest; a set of blue-tinted tattoos that one can only assume is in the shape of a dragon.

Personality
Before meeting Shokaku Kaien, Joukyuu was an extreme introvert and likewise was shunned by a good percentage of his peers. Since meeting Kaien, he creeps towards a more social lifestyle but the progress is slow. Being very intellectual, Joukyuu finds it almost difficult to speak with his peers and common people as he often finds their banter boring. Secretly, he wishes to grow stronger and impress the father that "abandoned him" to the academy.

History
In times past, the Senzoto family was considered noble in Kirigakure due to their impressive water-based Kekkei Genkai. It is fabled that they were able to replicate any water-technique at will, and it was proven time and time again during the Great Shinobi World War. At some time during the First Shinobi war, the head of the family Senzoto Otoro committed an unknown crime to which the punishment was execution for him and much of the Senzoto clan. The surviving clan members were then exiled from the Land of Water with rumors circulating the crime had something to do with the Kekkei Genkai. As a result, the remaining clan members forbade the use of Osoroshii Mizu, and forced all of its children to train heavily in only Taijutsu until this ability was forgotten. They eventually came to settle in the Land of Lightning and Kumogakure.

Joukyuu was the third child born into the Senzoto family of Kumogakure. At four, he was tattooed with a blue dragon on his right shoulder, the blue dragon being the family’s crest and a throwback to their former noble years. His father, Senzoto Takuma’s pride was always in his physical power and once taught Taijutsu at the academy there. When Joukyuu grew thin, yet very quick and intelligent, the man thought he was a disgrace as a son. In effect, he was disowned for his ‘weaknesses’. The man still couldn’t abandon his own son and so instead of training him within the family like his older siblings, he was sent to the Kumogakure Academy.

Joukyuu, with no surprise, ascended through the Academy quickly at almost genius levels, having mastered the basic techniques and chakra molding in mere months. His time there was none-too-pleasant, however. Being different in both size (small) and intelligence (very smart), Joukyuu was relentlessly bullied by some of the larger, stronger students. He met his first (and only) real friend during his short attendance at the Academy. During what seemed a now routine bullying session, a few of the students became violent and bloodied Joukyuu’s lip and brow. Enter Shokaku Kaien. After a quick scuffle, Kaien dispersed the bullies with his wide, sweeping Taijutsu style while mesmerizing Joukyuu with its power and efficiency. From that point on he was determined to learn it and relentlessly pestered Kaien to train him until he finally gave in.



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Primary Element
Water

Secondary Element
N/A




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Jutsu and Skills

Stats
Ninjutsu: 3/7
Genjutsu: 1/7
Taijutsu: 1/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable
Genin Justu-2/3:: Chuunin Jutsu-0/1:: Jounin Jutsu-0/0:: Kage Justsu-0/0::

Ninjutsu

Suiton: Suihachi no Jutsu(Hand of Waves)
Level: Genin
Type: Ninjutsu
A water release technique that creates a jet of water from the palm of the hand. At point blank, the jutsu hits with the force of a sledgehammer and becomes progressively weaker at its maximum range.(15 feet)



Taijutsu

Taiken Ryuu
Level: Genin
Type: Taijutsu
The core of the Shokaku style. Taiken requires an impressive amount of chakra control to execute perfectly, but the simplest variations can be accomplished with only personal stamina. Taiken, or "Great Circle", is a dexterous, acrobatic style that revolves around building the momentum of the body to execute precision strikes of varying power, beginning with deceptively slow, obvious patterns to fool the lesser skilled. The user moves quickly and often, utilizing full body spins and sudden stops and starts in motion. The stops are often accompanied with expulsions of chakra, whether the user's personal element is utilized or the latent attributes of the human body are empowered. Those who encounter it are often fooled into believing the individual strikes are very weak: a misconception that can have dire consequences.


Note: Joukyuu is in the process of learning Taiken Ryuu, and knows the basic stances and attacks and is not yet considered fully accomplished in the art.

Genjutsu
N/A

Chakra Control
Advanced Genin: Coming to the Academy with a genius-level knowledge of chakra control due to his family, Joukyuu is adept at standing on water, vertical wall climbing, jumping great heights, and quick movement.

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)


Osoroshii Mizu (Dreaded Water)

Osoroshii Mizu was discovered and practiced by the noble Senzoto clan of Kirigakure during the First Great Shinobi war. Due to a now forgotten heinous act committed by their head-of-family, Senzoto Otoro, the clan was all but annihilated, and the surviving members forced from the Land of Water. Now settled in the Land of Lightning the ability has been all but bred out of the family and intentionally shunned. Until now.
Whilst training in the academy, Senzoto Joukyuu found he had an incredible natural affinity for controlling his own chakra, and specifically water-natured chakra. The process has been slow, but upon discovering his hidden talent, Joukyuu has been diligently training in secret and he is always improving his control over the Kekkei Genkai.

The Osoroshii Mizu Kekkei Genkai is supplied by additional tenketsu around the body that can automatically convert stamina into elemental water chakra. This allows for certain D-rank to lower C-rank water jutsu to be completed without the usually necessary hand seals*. Jutsu performed with this chakra still requires the necessary time to concentrate and focus** but gives the user additional defensive capabilities during preparation such as movement, dodging, deflecting things, which would normally interrupt a shinobi preparing hand-seals. As the elemental chakra is produced onlookers that are paying close attention would notice a strange yet very slight emination of a blue aura surrounding the clan member. The intensity of the aura is more distinct around the area of concentration (usually the hands) and can vary depending on the level of jutsu being prepared. Another aspect of the Osoroshii Mizu is that the natural production of water chakra gathers moisture from the air, allowing water jutsu to be performed in areas where it otherwise would prove extremely difficult. Its even said water can be drawn from ones own body using the Kekkei Genkai, with all of the obvious dangers regarding such.

*At genin levels. As a Chuunin or above this ability extends to all known C-rank water jutsu and only if extensively trained IC to do so with each individual technique. Complex C-rank jutsu or above require hand-seals as normal.

**The length of time depending on the rank of said jutsu and how much IC training with the jutsu.


Note: The ability to produce the chakra can be used under any circumstance. However, if the character is tied up, suspended, grappled, or in any way restricted, the proper circulation of the elemental chakra is equally obstructed and no jutsu or ability can be derived from it.



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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons

4x Kunai
4x Shuriken
(All of which are hidden within his loose-fitting clothing.)

Armor
N/A

Accessories
N/A

Miscellaneous
N/A
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:59 pm


When you say mildly powerful how do you mean? Fire hose like powerful or a sledgehammer like powerful?

The KG isn't really valid. As stated in the Kekkei Genkai Topic. It shouldn't be an ability that improves your attacks. More of a form your capable of producing and convert it into a form of attack.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:59 pm


Sup Kev.

This guy's got the Shokaku seal o' approval; the history with my character is approved. Now to see if the mods need to hate on your Kekkei Genkai.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:02 pm


It's like a sledgehammer at point blank, like a fire hose at 10 feet and weakening from that point out. -edited for clarity on the profile-

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:07 pm


Shokaku Kaien
Sup Kev.

This guy's got the Shokaku seal o' approval; the history with my character is approved. Now to see if the mods need to hate on your Kekkei Genkai.


Alright Well everything aside from the KG is good.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:18 pm


What exactly is wrong with the Kekkei Genkai? How does naturally converting chakra into water-elemental chakra directly make my attacks stronger?

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:24 pm


It doesn't appear that this KG directly strengthens any jutsu in the sense that all water jutsu would magically become more powerful, and it falls within the category of mutation or unusual element. In fact it's a cross between the two, where his body has developed additional tenketsu to produce and mold chakra in an unusual fashion, naturally manufacturing an element through a mutation.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:24 pm


Well, is it supplying you water to preform these attacks? Since you example of you being able to convert local moister into these attacks then he answer is yes it does. This ability is nothing new, the second Hokage and Kitsume have both done this.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:30 pm


It's much like The guys that can naturally produce electricity from their body.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:34 pm


Except that the guy who could produce electricity from his body was ignoring the basic fundamentals of electricity and was therefore providing an impossibility the way it was presented.

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Koudoken

PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:42 pm


Well, its almost nothing like that actually. Water and water-elemental chakra are two completely different things. Molding water-elemental chakra is not the same as gathering moisture, gathering moisture is a side-effect to the chakra being there. The Kekkei Genkai is simply this: Additional tenketsu who's only purpose and ability is to naturally convert the body's stamina into water-elemental chakra. Water-Elemental chakra normally has to be intentionally molded to be used for a water jutsu, the KG just cuts out the middle man essentially and opens the door to later bloodline jutsu.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:47 pm


Typically the conversion of chakra into elemental chakra is done with hand-seals. Are you saying your can forgo handseals, effectively removing any 'delay' in your jutsu's? That allows you to do actions far too quickly and can result in multiple attacks/jutsu per turn.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 5:50 pm


Its nothing that dramatic. I'm a fair turn-based roleplayer/fighter and would never attempt throwing multiple jutsu down in one turn. There's still a delay in how often you can accomplish a jutsu, and as per normal you can only use one "fast" jutsu in a round. It doesn't instantly convert chakra, it still takes time, but during that time you're free to act unless that particular jutsu requires so much chakra that it takes your full concentration.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:00 pm


So Your character will use water attacks on a regular method like anyone else that uses water jutsu?

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 6:02 pm


Comments: Appearance section is kind of off. I was thin and wiry growing up. When I was 4'10" I was barely reaching 90 lbs. I didn't hit 131 with my thin and wiry build until I was 5'9".

I'm watchful of that now since we got a Genin passing who's what, 7'10" and only 106 lbs? Yeah.

History: The Crime might be unknown to your character and other shinobi, but it should STILL be listed here. As I state many, many times in the CCT Hidden History Details are bad. Too often we'll find something really bad comes from it. Even if you plan on it never coming up, or don't know what it'll be. List in here.

That way we're not blindsided later with "oh, his family is all Daemon Possessed Supernazis with four transformations, which unleash greater and greater power until they become a living diety of DOOMWATER".

Taijutsu: Just what sort of style is "Taiken". As long as you're listing it, give us a little taste of what it means.



And now.... ... The BLOODLINE:

Point blank, I'll tell you, I don't like it. Reason why? The Handseals notation. The Handseals are an important part of what a jutsu makes. The show itself speaks about handseals being what actually gives the energy it's shape and flow as it is released, it's the control valve and the runoff ditchs.

But not only that, it's an important part of combat. As it stands right now not having to use handseals basically makes all water jutsus a free action for you. Outside of the handseals nothing that activates a jutsu requires any physical activation after all. Since you don't need handseals this means you can be fully grappling, fully engaged in combat and busting out jutsus left and right. It gives you an advantage FAR beyond any other shinobi, as since you don't need to handsign all jutsus you perform are now uninterruptable. What can they do to disrupt your normally 36 some odd seal long Water Dragon Jutsu when you don't have to sit around whipping your hands around to make it. It suddenly takes teamwork out of the equation as no one has to cover you as you break out the heavy guns, you can do it in the heat of battle no worries.

As stands the only character that has that sort of power would be Naruto, a canon character and the title character as he spawns enough shadow clones to always give him enough time to pull off a rasengan gathering, etc. But even that theoretically an enemy could interrupt it if he found a way around the clones. Not so for you.

Hell boy, even Haku still had to use ONE hand to sign it out. And that was considered so amazing to be an impossible feat by those who witnessed it. And as we saw that was pretty powerful as one hand could counter Sasuke's weapon strikes while he snapped off jutsus.

That is the problem I have. That is why I don't approve this.
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