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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:18 pm


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Name: Addrian Mizrru
Aliases/ Nicknames: N/A
Age: Around 130 but looks 19
Seat: Unseated, for now.
Height: 5’ 7”
Weight: 120lbs
Personality: Addrian can be cocky at times also a flirt. But she is also very sweet when she likes someone. She can be scatter brained at times but when it comes down to fighting, that is when she gets serious. She is often thinking about her past. When she is then almost nothing can distract her.
Theme Song(s): Knife Called Lust by Hollywood Undead or My Black Dahlia by Hollywood Undead
Physical Description: Addrian is pretty thin. Her brown hair softly falls over her golden eyes. She looks a bit like the Arrancar Szayel Aporro Granz. She doesn’t need the glasses but she wears them just because. Her shihakushō is different than normal Soul Reapers because she believes in individualism. She also has no visible Zanpaktu. They reside in her wristgaurds.

Zanpakuto Name and Sealed Description: Miza, resides within Addrian's wrist gaurds.
Zanpaku-to Sword Type: N/A
Zanpaku-to Element: Earth

Shikai: "Form, Miza-maru" View Looks like regular new katana. Nothing really special in this stage. Miza is used like a regular sword. Only power, can deflect Kidou and any launching ablities, if used right.
Bankai: Part 1: "Dig." Miza is stabbed into the ground and, enveloped, into the earth. Cannot be used in the air or in the shadows. Don't know why.
Part 2: "Grow." By pin-pointing, by Addrian, she can target Miza under her enemy and make Miza come up from the ground and attack. If dodged, Addrian can relocate quickly.

Kidou:1. Sai (restrain): Locks their targets arms behind their back
Bakudo: N/A
Hado:4. Byakurai (pale lighting): The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
31. Shakkahō (shot of red fire): Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"
33. Sōkatsui (Blue Fire, Crash Down):Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to #31, but over a wider area and with more power.
Incantation: “Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Truth and temperance, upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws."

Other: N/A

Skills: Addrian had trained with some Soul Reapers before they were called into action. She is skilled in hand to hand combat. Not much with Bakudo and her Kidou could use some work. But her looks makes her an easy target for anyone that does not like either Arrancars or Soul Reapers only cause she looks like both. She learned Flash Step once as she got into the Soul Society.
Bio: Addrian had always wanted to become a Soul reaper. But her intentive to not listen nor work well with others got her denied at the Academy. It took a while but she learned everything she needed to. Addrian has always had a high spiritual pressure, but she was difficult to study or train with. A bit boy crazy she was last in some of her classes. A teacher finally sat her down and had a heart-filled talk with her. That was when she changed. SHe started doing well in all her classes. Learning to manage her Pressure and use it with her Zanpaktu. She had never been privleged like some of the others but she did work hard and became top of her class. With quickly thinking and now, working great with others.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:13 pm



#1: This is a separate arc from the main storyline of Bleach, therefor, none of the other characters exist. You will have to change your history as such.

#2: Though an interesting ability, I would like to just suggest that you use a Shikai/Bankai that isn't from the show. Creativity is warmly welcomed.

#3: Both your Shikai and your Bankai don't look like the correspond to each other well. One is about it being in fragments, the other is about it mimicking other abilities. Please choose one or the other and try and keep them similar.

#4: As for the Bankai right now, that seems a little overpowered. I'll have to take this up with the Crew. For my personal judgment that will stand until otherwise said, when you mimic another Zanpakutou and it's abilities, they are weaker than that of the original, even if both you and your opponent are at the same level. This is offset that you can bring out a specific element when needed.





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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:35 pm


Thank you for your input. I shall begin my changes. Though I may take a while I shall have them as soon as I can. Now for a java overload to make my brain work.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:51 pm


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Please try to have your changes done before midnight tonight that way I do not have to put an extension on the judging to fill the spots of captains. However if it takes more time it is okay. Just try to finish as son as possible.



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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:08 pm


I just finished. If you want me to add or edit or anything then just say so. I will be glad to. And as for the midnight thing...If I need to edit anything then I will do so before then.


well it's 11:57 at night here. Time to lay down and unwind.Please pm me with any news. I have Gaia alerts and I will come back on when I get one. Night.
PostPosted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:40 pm


I accept her as a character, good luck in the Captain audition-battle-thing. :3

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