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 Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 3:56 pm
This is the start of "The Ottsel Kingdom". Let me start: Zack ran though the city streets passing many construction projects going on around him. He was running towards town square where a big meeting was going on that everyone needed to attend. The speaker would be the king from the castle that overlooked the city. The city still ran by a king's ruler even though it was a somewhat high tech type like it should be in the year 2009. Zack was still running as he tripped and fell into the back of a few adult ottsels standing at the back of the crowd for the meeting. "Stupid teenagers these days always being late!" One of the men said in front of him. The other one turned to the guy and just glared. "Don't be such a downer. You know he has good intentions, I mean he at least showed up." Zack got up and looked at the man. "Thank you sir. I really appreciate you standing up for me. And I'm sorry for bumping into you." Zack apologized rubbing the back of his head. "Why that's OK. Everyone can make a mistake here and there." Zack thanked the man again as he got into view of the center where a street strait to the castle could be seen. "When is this going to start!" Zack exclaimed complaining already.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 3:59 pm
Tallia weaved through the crowed to the teenaged ottsel who looked impatient "Shh. You wanna make the rest of us look bad?" She whispered frowning. 'Guys will be the death of me I swear' She fumed silently.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:03 pm
"Well do you know when this will start? I wanna know what this is about." Zack said quietly to the female teen ottsel.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:07 pm
"No, but soon so keep your yap either quieter or shut." She said crossing her arms across her chest. She then turned her attention away from the male ottsel towards the square. "This better not be a total waste of time. I was in the middle of drafting a fully automatic crossbow." she muttered.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:17 pm
"Yeah, because that wouldn't give us a bad name at all." Zack whispered as the royal horns were blown. The crowed hushed as a horse drawn carriage pulled up to the center of the square. A door was pulled open as a tall ottsel dressed from head to toe in purple silk which has always been the kingdom's royal clothes. He had snow white fur and looked very old. As he approched the edge of the crowd he stepped onto the podium and opened his mouth to speak. "Hello citizens! I come here to warn you of metal head dogs that have been running in packs and attacking citizens out at nighttime. This appears to be something that could turn into if not take-" Suddenly a loud shot went of and the king fell to the ground as blood splatered across those closest to him at the time. The whole crowd gathered around the king as Zack just stood shocked and looking around for any suspicious looking figures. "What the heck just happened!" Zack yelled as screams could be heard in the air.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:22 pm
Adam ran threw the street to reach the town square, at the same time, fiddling with a small devise.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:37 pm
Tallia blinked a few times "I can't believe I just saw that!" She wailed shaking her head.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:44 pm
Zack was still looking around when a black cloaked ottsel holding a sniper rifel ran over the roof tops out of site before being noticed. "He just ran off! Now we need to get after him. But it's to late for now." Zack said as he looked at the ottsel. Suddenly a bodyguard got up with a sad tear filled face. "Attention everyone. King Edward Delvic the XIII has died by assassination. We are going to accept help by those who step forward to help." The bodyguard said in a sad tone as the crowed gasped out in shock. ZAck suddenly started to push though the crowed to the front of the group with determination. "I'll help. I think I have some talent that would help out." Zack yelled out to the bodyguard.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:44 pm
"made it." sed Adam as he arrived at the crowed.
"Oh my god!" Adam drooped his hand-held computer and stared.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:47 pm
Tallia weaved through the crowd also. "So will I! Who ever did this will suffer an eternity in hell!" She promised taking a defiant stance.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:50 pm
The bodyguard looked over the two ottsels. "Well it's nice to see some young ottsels step up. Well I guess you two are the hope of the kingdom." The bodyguard said as he looked over the crowd. "Thank you sir we won't let you down!" Zack yelled again as he looked for a good exit to town.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:53 pm
Talia nodded and ran to her place to collect her weapons.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:53 pm
Adam ran threw the crowed and to the dead ottsel.
"holy crap, what the hell happened?" he exclaimed.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:55 pm
"Have some respect. He was just assassinated. The two of us here are going after who done it." Zack said pointing at himself and the female ottsel.
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 4:59 pm
Taliia froze "Yeah, We're going to either A0 Arest this guy or B) Kill him."
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