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 Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:48 pm
Okay so here's the back-of-the-book synopsis.
Christopher Jones is your normal seventeen-year-old boy. He goes to public school, has a bratty little sister, and works part time at the local grocery store. But his life turns from normal to weird when he meets Adalyn, a mysterious toddler he found lying in the middle of a meadow. With no clue as to who she is, she follows him home. The Jones welcome her into their house as a guest and she stay for awhile. But she's not just a little girl. Adalyn, during dangerous times can grow to twice her size and become a beautiful seventeen-year-old girl, same age as Chris. She joins him in school and takes on two lives while trying to regain her memories of who she is and where she's from and how she can get home.
But okay, there is one clue. Adalyn wears a locket around her neck and she somehow knows all about it. She claims it's from her mother and it's a communicator that can allow her to understand and speak any language in the universe. Will this information prove helpful to Chris who is starting to fall in love with the teenage girl who is the same as the tiny girl he treats like a sister.
Okay, kinda a bad synopsis and it don't make sense, but try and understand it and comment on the story line.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 11:26 pm
That sounds really interesting, and I love the concept of the locket. Maybe some chapters will be posted here? (hopefully)
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Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:50 am
Infamous Silhouette That sounds really interesting, and I love the concept of the locket. Maybe some chapters will be posted here? (hopefully) sure but i just started writing yesterday and now im grounded from my laptop... =[
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:19 pm
Its different thats really kool. Like is that just the backround or is it a rough draft. it sounds good. I like the locket 2!!
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