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emeraldocean_von_siraine

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 12:59 am


http://shadowknightpaladin.deviantart.com/

That's the link to my DA. I'm trying to do a manga and was wondering if I could get some feedback?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:06 am


~bumps~

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:16 pm


I'm on page four right now, and I quite like it. c: Something to work on: smoother inking, it seems a little rough to me. And anatomy, you can never get too much practice on anatomy. c:
PostPosted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:53 pm


Yeah, the inking got a bit faded due to the watercolor pencils...0.0'''

Haha, yes, anatomy. I'm trying to work it out right now. Specially on the face xD

Thanks a lot ^_^

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