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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:14 pm
I'm doing this picture for state Latin covention; it's Helen of Troy. Her facial structure seems slightly off, but I can't place it, as I've been staring at it for at least 15 hours. Not straight, of course. xp Also I'm going to change her hair color to something darker. Any suggestions based on her skin tone? Merci Bocu! Edit: Ok, now I need suggestions on the background. Thanks!
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:25 pm
Great as always.
Her mouth is high and skewed, her nose ends too early, her jaw is too strong, and her right eye is too high.
If you wish I could redline.
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:03 pm
Symmachus Great as always. Her mouth is high and skewed, her nose ends too early, her jaw is too strong, and her right eye is too high. If you wish I could redline. Oh, yes a redline would be very helpful, if it's not too much trouble.
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:25 pm
Crawled out of my suicidal depression and crippling artist block to deliver this message.  Turns out everything fixes itself with a headshape change. Remember that the eyes are always halfway down the head. Going back to being really emo. Sigh. It's hard to even TYPE correctly. That fever really savaged my motor control.
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:24 pm
Dawww... Feel better!
Dude, I didn't notice how poofed up her hair was. xd I think that her... thingy threw me off.
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:43 pm
I thought she looked fine before, except that she needed a darker shade of blond hair. The things that threw me off is her lips are shiny and her right eye looks more like it's equal with the horizon.
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Overly Chaotic Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 3:35 pm
I love it seriously
it might be me but i think one of her irises is a little bit off but then again i guess it depends on the perspective
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:37 am
So, I need to do a background. I hate backgrounds.
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Posted: Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:06 pm
Looking better and better, Dex.
I haven't worked on my super huge project for two days now. Thanks for remindnagging me. wink
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Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 2:00 am
Yes, much better.
Add a little more roundness to her face, its a bit too angular, and if your not done the right forearm is too short, fill in spots of the dress a bit. It does need more of a background somehow, but keep it a little plain, that way we are looking at her, not an uber awesome background. ;D
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The one that never was Captain
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Posted: Sat Nov 28, 2009 12:56 pm
Symmachus Looking better and better, Dex. I haven't worked on my super huge project for two days now. Thanks for remindnagging me. wink Feel bad about procrastinating Faust, fell VERY BAD. XD I am such a nag. wink
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