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Ruby Red Blood

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Andreia18

PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:44 pm


uh, not sure how this works, but heres my poem any ways =3!!

Ruby Red Blood
As i bring the razor closer to my wrist, my heart pounds
Not in fear
But with glee
This is that which is going to put my tortured soul out of pain,
Put me in an eternal rest
I make a swift move with the razor
The last thing I see is the ruby red blood,
And then blackness
I am at peace at last



I would not actually do that, but it does come to mind sometimes when I am in great sarow, or inraged.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 11:40 am


This poem is pretty well done. However, I feel you could have expanded it a bit more. Or, maybe that's just me. I like long poems. :3

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