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 Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:59 pm
i'll wait, you'll see
there's suffering inside of me
but i could even wait forever
being a grand wallflower
it could get old
but as we grow older
you'll see
that i'm just happy to be living
but i can't bear the sight of watching
a living thing fall apart
and i just can't hold back this feeling
i have had from the start
it could get old
but as we grow older
you'll see
that i'm just happy to be living here
and i can't even picture
what your eyes have seen
and my mind can't stop running
not even when i sleep
you'll see no one'll fall apart
within my reach
and within our garden
you'll see my happiness can rise
as well
and if you're killing all the ants
that's fine
i'll take part
cause we could live without a little
pester from the start
but if you're killing more than that
including, or not, yourself
i just can't take part
cause it just grows old
as we grow older
you'll see i'm just happy to
be out of here
you'll see i'm not willing to go
any longer
without you here
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so i guess this is a poem but it could be a pretty good song too. i'm no musician though, unfortunately.
p.s. enjoy. smile
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Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 2:02 pm
that poem is rlly good
a bunch of my poems r in the other one x3
here is the most recent one I posted today
¿dónde está el amor?
oscuridad que aprieta alrededor de mí
tan densamente y obscuridad puedo descubierto respiración
el peso del mundo está machacando encima de mí
no capaz de conseguir lejos
el alma que rompe el dolor de la soledad es así que grande mi corazón siente como está no más en mi pecho
falta de su pelo negro dulce y de sus ojos azules conmovedores
nunca verlos lejos hacen el peso machacante más insoportable la luz en mi vida que tuerce en espiral abajo del dren
Siento la necesidad de dejar la oscuridad asumir el control mi vida
¿si lo pierdo cuál está allí una punta a ser buen más largo?
todo el dolor del perder tan grande
todo el dolor que me llena de miseria
¿dónde está mi amor?
¿adónde ha ido?
¿cómo puedo encontrarlo otra vez?
¿qué sucedió a mi vida?
¿dónde está mi esperanza?
adiós obscuridad agradable de la luz
(sorry its in spanish)
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:11 am
sorry, i can't speak spanish. xp
just a little bit of french.
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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:34 pm
ooo
hey y dont u post in the other poem subforum????
well ill give ya the english verson XD
darkness tightening around me
so thick and dark i can barely breath
the weight of the world is crushing on top of me
not able to get away
the soul shattering pain of loneliness is so great my heart feels like it is no longer in my chest
missing your sweet black hair and your soulful blue eyes
never to see them away makes the crushing weight all the more unbearable
the light in my life spiraling down the drain
I feel the need to let the darkness take over my life
if i lose him what is there a point to being good any longer?
all the pain of the lose so great
all the sorrow filling me with misery
good bye light welcome dark
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