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PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:20 pm


Roses Falling Like Rain


Roses are falling like raindrops, filling the air with their gentle and beautiful fragrance. They move me, make me want to sing, to dance, they make me feel love for beautiful things. It is a feeling like no other, the feeling that the roses give to me. I feel pure, loved, and helpless before its’ beauteous love. I am entranced by the sight of the roses that fall like rain.

The roses float toward me, gently brushing against my face, leaving their kisses behind. It feels like the touch of an angel, the embrace of a princess. It feels like love, for what else could it be? This power is uncontrollable, and I like it that way. It caresses me, enjoys my presence, and returns my love.

I see this magical power of love every day that I am alive. I see the power of love blossoming into a beautiful rose, soon to join the others in their fragrant enchantment. A rose for every time I feel this love, feel this joy. A rose for every time I said ‘I love you’ to her. A rose for every ounce of joy that she gives me. A rose for everyday that I go on living with her love.
PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 5:52 pm


Ah young love. It's very sweet. I take exception to one line and that is this rather ponderous "I feel pure, loved, and helpless before its’ beauteous love." I don't know...that line just is not doing it for me on a couple of levels.

I can see you are expressing your love. The poem is really personal, you know? So I will step out now and leave the reply you are looking for from the one it is intended for.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:41 am


I told you most of what I thought in the message, but the poem is incredibly sweet, and I really like it. The description and visuals are amazining, you did an amazing job.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:57 am


Well, I don't want to take that part out, Uma. I already put it in.

Kia-I wanted to show you how you make me feel.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 8:12 pm



And all I know is you get me through the day,
Every day and you help me sleep at night



This is so sweet. :3


Not only that, you've seem to found a way
To make everyday the best day of my life

PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:30 pm


this is sweet heart

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