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I'd like you to add in your puppets following the puppet template, if you'd be so kind m'lady. Also, I would advise that you consider the arm and leg to themselves be puppets as they seem to act like a smaller scale version of Sasori's body puppet.

Edited it a few times. Lead isn't a metal to make teeth out of, It's poisonous and heavy. Wood limbs would work better and ceramic for teeth.

I gotta agree with Kakashi on this one, but for slightly different reasons. We've seen amature puppet users (Kankuro) using only 1-3 puppets at a time. Then we get to the second stage or 'average' Jounin puppet users such a Chiyo using 10 puppets. Finally you get to expert puppet users such as Sasori using upwards of 100 puppets.

Now as your teacher, I would like you to limit your puppets down to 3-4, simply because I am going to be sticking you with one of the best puppet users in all of the ninja villages to act as your teacher. I believe that, while you think these puppets are the ideal combination, that your teacher will show you a different path to follow in your puppetry career, perhaps he will even give you idea's for new puppets that are nothing like your current puppet set.

Consider this scenario: You have all X amount of your puppet slots taken up already, your teacher gives you the idea for a puppet so awesome that you are literally foaming at the mouth to make it. BUT WAIT! You are unable to because all of your slots are already full! That's no fun at all!

I have always fallen under the following philosophy: "Let the roleplay guide your character not the other way around." One of the best ways to allow the roleplay to really meld with your character, is to cut down on your initial 'input' (puppets in your case) and allow the things that happen in the RP to determine how the character grows and adds in new things to their persona.

In your defense: Many of Kankuro's puppets are probably Complexity level 3-4 while yours are level 2, which is GOOD. I honestly am in complete favor of less complex puppets, especially in a puppet users 'early years'.

You can do with that as you want, but trust me, if you follow these words of wisdom you will be rewarded handsomely.

You sure shouldn't remove anything else because as-is this profile looks great in my opinion. Accepted unless somebody else would like to make another comment.