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infinite_personalities101
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 Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:17 pm
This is a thread dedicated to young writers of poetry, stories, or just overall need to vent in a poetic or fantastic form.
Rules:
You can post any type of poetry or story that you wish, but please keep it PG-13
This is a meanie free zone! Don't bash anyone's poems or stories!!!
You may constructively criticise posts but nothing hurtful. If you don't want to be criticised, please type that somewhere on your post.
You can post as much as you anytime you want.
You can post anything you want, personal, humor serious, it doesn't matter, so long as it's yours.
Please do not steal any writings from anyone.
Have fun and be creative!!!!
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:21 pm
this fake smile could never hide,
what these eyes could never say.
your fake words could never hide,
how you really feel.
My true feelings show without a doub,
and you ignore them.
My heart turns to stone,
and i slowly die while i watch you leave.
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infinite_personalities101
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:28 pm
awwww thats a good poem, and i'm sorry about the actual event that inspired it. it was really heartfelt, i liked it ^^
i wrote this a couple of years ago....
Silent Hill
He's strong and fast,
and I love him still,
though my heart will never last,
so I'll cry here on my silent hill...
for the hill is where i grieve,
for my heart you had to kill,
from my pain is my repreive,
so i'll cry here on my silent hill.
for me you do not love,
so i'll take the dreadful pill,
and fall into the darkness in which i have been shoved,
so i will die here on my silent hill....
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:49 pm
infinate_personalities101 awwww thats a good poem, and i'm sorry about the actual event that inspired it. it was really heartfelt, i liked it ^^ i wrote this a couple of years ago.... Silent Hill He's strong and fast, and I love him still, though my heart will never last, so I'll cry here on my silent hill... for the hill is where i grieve, for my heart you had to kill, from my pain is my repreive, so i'll cry here on my silent hill. for me you do not love, so i'll take the dreadful pill, and fall into the darkness in which i have been shoved, so i will die here on my silent hill.... thanks, ur poem is good too. yeah, that person was really important to me. oh well
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:55 pm
ok here's another one i wrote.
I struggle to fight.
But you put me down.
I get back up.
But you put me down.
I wish for a better tomorrow,
But you put me down.
I hope we could be together.
But you put me down.
Here's to life,
and here's to death.
Here's to love.
and here's to hate.
I was your everything,
but now I'm your nothing.
I struggle to breath,
as i watch you leave
with my beating heart clutched in your hand.
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 12:55 pm
Dead heart beats
Thump... my heart goes no more
It lays motionless, beatless, emotinless
Its dead
No love shall grow
no happyness shall flourish, no joy to enlighten
It lay still, bitter, sad, and cold
No heat or flame burning
It makes tears and bitter rage
So I say Thump... A distant sound my heart knows no more
For erver still--
for ever silent--
For ever cold--
For ever bitter--
For ever crying--
For ever dead.
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:53 pm
I'll sticky this in the art forum.
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:14 pm
im going to draw a picture.
a pictur with a twist.....
ill draw it with a razro
blade.ill draw it on my
wrists
_____________________________
ill always be beside you
until the very end,
wiping all your tears away,
being your best freind.
ill smile when u smile.
& feel the pain u do
& if u cry a single tear i promis ill cry too.
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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:21 pm
Realization that within the blink of an eye Everything that was kept hidden away Can all boil over and let out What has been so hard to try to keep in. This life has never been worth living The reason we keep going on is for One little flame that could Amount to the biggest fire This world has ever seen Or has ever tried to get out alive from. That fire will keep the blood that pumps through my veins As warm as it is or as cold. The world will never know my nuisance Torture that has been inflicted into the very core of our being They’ll never know Nor shall they have the slightest inkling of a care And all that remains of this broken soul Is the smallest ember of a flame Were the heart of the body was held And as we lay Choking on our agony Drowning in our sorrows We realize that the shadows are right That within the blink of an eye It can all come crashing down over us Everything we’ve tried so hard to build up Will one day all plummet down upon us Destroying everything we’ve worked on Realization that in the blink of an eye Everything is possible
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:39 am
A million friends are nice to have but having no one to save can lead to a million tears
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:31 pm
CottonCandyYURI-JUICE A million friends are nice to have but having no one to save can lead to a million tears dude, thats deep.good job
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:38 pm
Maple Leaf
An autumn day,
The branches on the tree sway,
Down fall two leaves,
Eying one and not the other,
They fall side by side,
I gaze at both judging their beauty,
I chose the Maple over the Oak,
Held the leaf to the sky for what seemed a moment,
and let it go,
Through a harsh winter,
And the brutal showers of Spring came summer,
A familiar breeze swept across the sky,
And the leaf returns stuck to my chest for a moment,
before the wind carries it away once more,
Foolish I may be to follow the leaf for hundreds or thousands of miles, No matter the distance I may be from it I will pursue.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:58 pm
Wow, you guys are amazing poets. I heart all of them!!!!! Makes me kinda feel bad about my poem, but I'm gonna post it anyway.
Why can't I be single?
Why does everyone insist I mingle?
I am a free spirit!
Let them hear it!
I don't wanna just be some guy's girlfriend,
I want to be me, or the leader of a band
Why can't they see?
I just wanna be me!
Can't they let me be free?
From the curse of love
And the end of it
Don't need a lover by my side
When I told him I loved him I lied
Nobody leaves me alone
Can't answer my phone.
I don't need a man!
Nobody holding my hand!
I don't need Prince Charming for Happily Ever After.
I just need good friends and lot's of laughter.
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:17 pm
(~What is Pain?~)
Love, last until your heart breaks
Family, last until you die
Friends, last for a life time
But, pain. . .pain last forever alive, or dead. . .
Pain is a conflicting emotion that can never go away once you experience it
Its for ever emburned into your head, never leaving your thoughts. . .
But, what really is pain?
Pain can not just only be an emotion or hurting your self
When your heart hurts, It can be a couple break-up (pain)
When you want to cry, it can be a family crisis (pain)
When everything isn't going your way, it can be a frustrating time. . .its called pain. . .
Pain. . .is anything that you expericence in life. . .
Pain. . .is an un-known thing. . .
Tell me. . .what is pain?. . .
~_By: Life shattered angel A.K.A: Kyle Date: December 21, 2009_~
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 6:41 pm
Blood_n_Darkness im going to draw a picture. a pictur with a twist..... ill draw it with a razro blade.ill draw it on my wristsThat made me laugh. In a good way. :3
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