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Ringo California

PostPosted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:06 pm




Ikazuchi Sendai

Age
52

Height
6'01"

Weight
174 lbs

Eye Color
Gold

Hair Color
Grey

Village
None

Clan
Ikazuchi

Village Rank
Village Rank

Other Titles
The Golden Boy

Appearance Description
Sendai has aged well. His grey hair is still in full form, close cropped to his head. His build is slim but muscular, accentuated by the fact that he doesn't wear a shirt, only loose grey pants and a black cloak, worn loosely in poor weather. He goes barefoot at all times.

Personality
A man of few needs or passions, Sendai is essentially lackluster in all emotions or desires, save to a) Fulfill his promise to David Spragut and B) Ensure that his son Hachi dies a frighteningly painful death for his insolence. Sendai can be arrogant at times, but that arrogance is the kind that comes with old age and is often mistaken for wisdom.

History
Sendai's personal history, as described in a speech:

"My name is Ikazuchi Sendai. I was once called 'Kintaro,' the Golden Boy. My nickname comes from my eyes, my lightning. I was the fourth generation of the Ikazuchi Clan of the mountains outside of Konoha. We were, to put it simply, nouveax riche. At the time that our ancestor first developed the kekkei genkai, rai jutsu was uncommon, and he and his sons accumulated a vast wealth with their talents. However, with each generation, the kekkei genkai appeared weaker. Our patriarch's sons and grandsons had blue eyes, a weaker form of lightning, and could not reach the third and final level of release.
The money began to run out.
But then, I was born.
I was perfect, they said. Equal or greater in power to the Ancestor. From a young age I showed a mastery of the kekkei genkai so great that the use of standard jutsu were useless to me by the age of 18. With me as a puppet, my father and grandfather slowly attempted to rebuild the family wealth.
At 19, I left the mansion, eager to see the world and be free of my father's control.
In two years of travel, I realized the flaw with the Five Great Villages. It was simple: there was no individual. In our ninja society, a man is not a man. He is merely an extension of another man, who in turn is an extension of a Kage, who in turn is an extension of the beliefs his ancestors beat into him. There was no freedom, even in the smaller villages like Yuki or Getsugakure.
I celebrated my 21st birthday in Getsugakure, in the ramen shop. It was owned by Kaisou Kimura then, now his son Kujira runs it, I believe. A large rat crawled clean across the table, in plain view, and old man Kujira ran about the whole restaurant chasing it with a spatula. I caught its tail between my thumb and forefinger, lightning quick, and brought it outside.
Long story short, the rat was David Spragut, and he had an idea. I liked the idea. It was grand, idealistic, but I realized I was not ready. I made an oath to David that I would return to my family home and one day return to join Hakumei.
But I was arranged into a marriage. I had two sons. I was tied down to my family home with chains of responsibility, and in a way, I forgot Hakumei. My sons grew. One betrayed me. The other was useless to me. They moved on, and my father died. My wife died. Through the betrayal of my eldest son, the world believes me long dead. So I will finish this long and needless speech. What are my goals? To fulfill my oath to David. To insure than Hakumei stands a fighting chance."



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Primary Element
Lightning

Secondary Element
None




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Jutsu and Skills

Stats
Ninjutsu: 6/7
Genjutsu: 3/7
Taijutsu: 4/7

Total Jutsu Learned/Learnable
Genin Justu-6/10:: Chuunin Jutsu-5/5:: Jounin Jutsu-2/2:: Kage Justsu-1/1::

Ninjutsu

Name of Jutsu: Denki no Jutsu (Battery Technique)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User can give an electric charge to any object. Conductors hold charges of a greater magnitude for a longer period of time. Requires 1 bar of electric power.

Name of Jutsu: Raibunshin no Jutsu (Electric Clone Technique)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User creates a human shaped electro-magnetic field that acts as any bunshin would, save for its electric properties. Requires 1 bar of electric power for <2 clones, 2 bars for <4 clones, and 3 bars for <6 clones.

Name of Jutsu: Rakurai (Lightning Bolt)*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User fires a small bolt of lightning at an enemy. Requires 1 bar of electric power for each small lightning bolt, 2 for each large lightning bolt

Name of Jutsu: Denkiri (Electric Blade)*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User's hand becomes a sharp, lightning blade. Similar to chakra razor. Requires 1 bar of electric power for small, dullish blade, 2 bars of electric power for large sharp blade, and 3 bars of electric powers for two large, sharp blades.

Name of Jutsu: Raiheki (Lightning Burst)*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User's natural electric field temporarily explodes outward in all directions. Concentration and Chakra control determines size, duration, and magnitude of field. Requires 1 bar of electric power for every 2 cubic feet of extension.

Name of Jutsu: Kitsune no Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Fox Spirit Summoning Technique)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Description: User can summon five of the fox spirits:
Nauta: A small, one-tailed ghost fox. Can fly, turn invisible, and turn intangible. Used for reconnaissance.
Katrina: Two-tailed fox-girl wielding two katana.
Ryoka: Lion-sized hunter fox. Steel sharp teeth and claws.
Kaminari: An elephant sized, six tailed golden fox, Kaminari can extend an electro-magnetic field with a 15-foot radius out from its body.
Chikawa: A tiny one-tailed, only a foot long, bloodred fox. Can enter the body through chakra flows and cause random disruptions. (Ex: sudden lack of chakra in one area, too much chakra, too little, etc.)

Name of Jutsu: Denkawa (Electric River)*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Description: User can extended a string of lightning and control it as one would control a whip. Concentration and Chakra control determines size, duration, and magnitude of field. Requires 1 bar of electric power for every 4 feet of length, and costs 1 bar of electric power for every post it is used in.

Name of Jutsu: Magnet Hammer*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Description: User concentrates electromagnetic field surrounding fist. Polarity and charge of the field can be determined at whim. Useful for blocking other raijutsu attacks or reflecting magnetized objects. Concentration and Chakra control determines size, duration, and magnitude of field. Requires 1 bar of electric power for weak field, 2 for medium, and 3 bars of electric power for a large, powerful field.

Name of Jutsu: Tentou no Hataki (Heaven's Revenge)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Description: User creates a small, ground level thunderstorm localized in a 20 cubic foot area, giving a charge to the air and causing randomized blasts of lightning at objects within/near the storm. Requires 4 bar of electric power.

Name of Jutsu: Tsubasa (Wings)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Description: User creates a pair of electric "wings" that repel the earth's magnetic pull and themselves to allow the user limited flight. Duration, heighth, and speed of flight are all determined by concentration and chakra flow. Requires 2 bars of electric power initially, and another bar of electric power for each post it is used in.

Name of Jutsu: Raijin (God of Thunder)*
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Jounin
Description: This jutsu wraps an object of the user's choice (User's hand must make physical contact with object) in a near deadly electromagnetic field. (2 Kilovolts, 1.05 Amperes). Essentially an electric prison. Concentration and Chakra control determines duration of field. Requires 2 bars of electric power initially, and another bar of electric power for each post it is used in.

Name of Jutsu: Den Guujin no Jutsu (Lightning Puppet Technique)
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Kage
Description: This jutsu extends lightning chakra "strings" into an opponent to control mechanical movement. (Voluntary muscle movement. Cannot be used to stop lungs, heart, vital organs, or shut down brain.) The user's hand must make physical contact with the victim of the jutsu. Extreme Concentration and Chakra control is required to maintain control of victim, and can be broken one at a time by:
a) Incredible feats of strength/willpower (Hero Deus Ex Machina)
b) Electromagnetic Obstruction of Chakra line
c) Minor wounds to USER
Or all at once by:
d) Knocking victim unconscious or killing victim
e) Severely wounding or distracting USER
Requires 2 bars of electric power initially, and another bar of electric power for each post it is used in.

Taijutsu

Name of Jutsu: The Path of Redemption*
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Genin
Description: User's muscles are charged with lightning, making their movements quicker, crisper, and deadlier. Characterized by palm strikes, palm blocks, and flat-footed kicks/knees. Requires 1 bar of electric power.

Name of Jutsu: The Path of Revenge*
Type of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Rank of Jutsu: Chuunin
Description: When the User's electric field is already amplified, these techniques cause the friction to crackle and spark, and occasionally opponent is randomly shocked. Sparks are more for show than anything else. Characterized by sudden grapples, holds, and chops or sweeping kicks. Requires 1 bar of electric power.

Genjutsu
None.

Chakra Control
Near Perfect.

Kekkei Genkai (Clan Specialty)

Raiyakugan: A three-release doujutsu/muscle combination.
First Release: User gains enhanced vision/reflexes, visual spectrum extends to the electromagnetic level, allowing user to see the flow of electricity, and heightens own chakra output.
Second Release: User can control own electric field and extend it to conductive objects they are touching.
Third Release: The shinobi's electric field becomes completely malleable, able to extend, retract, and condense based on the user's techniques. All techniques show a significant power increase.

Charge Bar (Units of 1.5 kilovolts/.8 Amperes)
[llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll]
Charge bar initially has 10 units of electric power, and increases 3 bars per post with level 1 kekkei genkai, 2 bars per post with level 2 kekkei genkai, and 1 bar per post with level 1 kekkei genkai or no kekkei genkai.

*Techniques are enhanced by Raiyakugan


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Equipment, Items, Other

Weapons
None.

Armor
None.

Accessories
None.

Miscellaneous
Nothing.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:03 pm


One thing I would very much like to see is a 'charge bar' put in for the character. Perhaps every turn have him generate X amount of charge that is stored in the body and released for attacks. For the attacks you can place the amount of charge used per turn to use the attack and the number of turns used to maintain the attack. You can have a number of charges automatically come with activating your Kekkei Genkai, but it shouldn't be a large number.

Essentially, use it similar to how Tamahome Heero used to use his ashes, keeping track of a separate and distinct 'number' that is used and consumed through use of jutsu and regained through either resting or fighting without the use of jutsu.

What this would help with: If you have techniques that seem too powerful to be classified at the level that they are classified at, you could adjust them to need a higher electric charge, so it will take you more turns to 'prep' for the attack, essentially making the attack weaker due to time spent waiting for it to be ready, while allowing you to hold onto the jutsu's that your character craves.

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Ringo California

PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:11 pm


Good idea! I'll have it similar to David's Order Bar, that it accumulates such and such amount of charges each turn naturally, gains such and such each turn from the kekkei genkai, and uses such and such for each attack:

For example, let's say I'll make my max amount of charge 30 bars.

So I start out with:

Charge Bar (Units of 1.5 kilovolts/.8 Amperes)
[llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll]

10 naturally charged. And I would gain one bar each turn naturally, and maybe 2 or 3 bars depending on what level of the kekkei genkai I was at, and would lose a certain amount for each attack. I'll edit the jutsus to show how much charge they take each, but how does that seem to you?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:22 pm


Ringo California
Good idea! I'll have it similar to David's Order Bar, that it accumulates such and such amount of charges each turn naturally, gains such and such each turn from the kekkei genkai, and uses such and such for each attack:

For example, let's say I'll make my max amount of charge 30 bars.

So I start out with:

Charge Bar (Units of 1.5 kilovolts/.8 Amperes)
[llllllllllllllllllllllllllllll]

10 naturally charged. And I would gain one bar each turn naturally, and maybe 2 or 3 bars depending on what level of the kekkei genkai I was at, and would lose a certain amount for each attack. I'll edit the jutsus to show how much charge they take each, but how does that seem to you?
That's what I was hoping for smile . But I'd make the relationship a bit different:

Gain 1 tick at level 3 of ability, 2 ticks and level 2 of the ability and 3 ticks at level 1 of the ability. So you regain a lot more the lower level you are in the kekkei genkai but you are limited in the number of techniques you can preform.

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Ringo California

PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:43 pm


Oh, I see.

Yeah, I suppose that makes it a lot less OP.

Groovy. I'll make sure to use that Charge Bar in every battle and I'll add the tick levels for each Jutsu, but other than that, any other complaints, or am I approved?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:49 pm


I'll have to look over it after you've stuck the tick levels into your jutsu's and added how your going to do the charge bar in your kekkei genkai, but it sounds like it will be acceptable.

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Ringo California

PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:54 pm


All right, seems about right to me, anyway.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 7:23 pm


Quote:
Name of Jutsu: Denkawa (Electric River)*


I would like to see the length of this changed to 1 bar for 3 or 4 feet instead of 7 and some sort of a maintaining charge, maybe 1/2 the bar cost to initially create the technique.

Quote:
Name of Jutsu: Rakurai (Lightning Bolt)*


I would prefer if you did 1 bar for each small bolt and 2 bars for each large bolt. So if you wanted to create say 5 bolts, 2 large and 3 small, it would cost 2+2+1+1+1=7 bars.

EXTRA: Last, it might be a better help if instead of sensing electric current in the first release, you instead literally saw the flow of electric currents, similar to how the Byakugan can see the flow of chakra.

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Ringo California

PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:42 pm


Edits made.

Groovy?
PostPosted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:52 pm


Thank you for making the required changes. I currently see no specific reason not to approve the profile. If another moderator feels differently, I will temporarily defer to them until the issue is resolved, but for the time being you are accepted.

EDIT: Just for the record, the fact that you have nothing in your inventory means that your characters has zero items on him. If your going to need kunai or anything you should add them in.

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