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Ebil-NekoCat Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 12:08 pm
Halloween is just around the corner, it's time to get our spook on!
Write a story or poem that will chill our bones and make us check the closet before we go to sleep. In other words, make it scary! Once you've written it, post it here! The best scary story will win a prize of 2000 gold!
It can be fanfiction or completely original, and it doesn't have to be Disney related! You can make it about anything you want!
Best of luck, the contest ends on Halloween!
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 1:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:16 pm
What You Are About To Read Is 100% True...If You Scaire Too Easly,Do NOT Continue:
There Was Once A Women. So Lovely Was She,She Made Every Man Wish To Make Her His. She Was Well Loved By All. All...But One. It Was A Dark New Moon One Night...One That Made You Wish Not To Leave Your Home. This Women Desided To Take A Walk For A Bit,Thinking Nathing Would Go Wrong. Befor She Chould Get A Block From Her House,A Darkly Dressed Man Grabed Her And Forsed Her Back Into Her Home. The Man Undressed Her,Tied Her To A Char And Gagged Her With Her Own Underwhere. The Women Tryed Her Hardist To Get Free,But The Nots Where Just Far To Strong. The Man Smerked As He Wisped A Small Swish-Blade Around Her Now Vary Cold Body. Seen After,He Heired A Baby Cry. He Fallowed The Nose,And Came Back With The Women's 1 Month Old Baby Girl. He Sat The Baby On Her Mother's Lap And Counted Down From 3. Once He Hit 3,He Stabed The Baby In The Neck. The Baby's Corpes Fall To The Floor,As The Women Cryed. The Man Then Yanked On The Women's Hair And Said She Would Be Next To Die. The Women Tryed To Screm Thou Her Gag,But Failed As The Man Stabed Her In Her In The Neck Aswell. The Man Admired His Work For A Bit Then Left. When The Cops Came To The House The Next Morning,They Had No Clues Or Leads. The Man Had Left Befor They Could Investagate More. No-One Knows Why He Did It. Why He Killed A Baby And Her Mother Like That. All They Know,Is He Is Lose Somewhere...And Who Knows Who Will Be Next?
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Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:18 pm
I do like yours! By the end I was like, "Erm... Maybe I should make sure the door is locked?"
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Ebil-NekoCat Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:00 pm
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
A room is a sanctuary. A domain thats blocks out the harsh reality of the outside world. So to is it for this man. Sitting in a chair of luxurious cushion gazing into the fire pit, the man looked every bit the wealthy englishman. An expensive suit decorated with lace cuffs and gold trim, he swirled a glass of wine in his right hand, his sight never leaving the fire.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
The man's eyes flickered to the clock in the corner. It was an old grandfather clock, ticking with the swing of the pendulum. Frankly he didnt know why it was still ticking. He hadnt replaced the batteries nor wound it up in years, but it continued its steady rhythm. A testatment to humanity, or what was left of it. That thought slowly brought him to the present, and just how bad things have gotten in only a few years.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc
Slowly rising from his chair, he made his way to the only window in the room, gazing at his reflection. His hair was unkept, his face looked haggard and very very old. But it was his eyes that frighten the man more than anything. There was a time where they sparkled an emerald green, like an uncut emerald just plucked from the mine. Now they looked sickly and dark, the eyes of a man that has seen too much in a short time. Then he looked past his reflection to the world outside.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
The world outside was a choatic wasteland of what was once the proud city of New York. Buildings had been toppled over, craters in the roads were located through out the city, and the Statue of Liberty had been broken in half. This scene replayed through the man's mind, as he was there to witness the destruction firsthand. So to was it that every major city fell, across the globe. Every refuge of man that has ever been built had been destroyed, every human erased from their mortal coil. All had fallen, and the man knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that it was his weakness that brought this about. His one mistake.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
A rattle at the door brought his attention to the couch he had put there, barring the way. It wouldnt have done anything, but he suppose that it being there was a comfort. The door rattled more, the door cracking outward in a shower of splinters. Not too much longer, the man thought, not too much longer at all.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
The door finally gave way, in a explosion of sound and splinters. The couch was shoved out of the way, and a creature stood at the doorway. It wasnt very tall, five feet at the most. Its deformed body made his right side bigger than his left, so it walked with an uneven gait. Its right arm was so large that it had to drag it across the floor. Its one good left eye surveyed the room before seeing the man for the first time. In a burst of speed uncanny to its form, it was across the room and gripped the man in its powerful right arm before he could blink.
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...
The man looked over the creature, seeing it how it had grown. He remembered bouncing the same creature on his knee, telling it bedtime stories, staying within this very room away from everything and everyone. Just the two of them. He remembered when the creature wanted to see the outside world, and he has denied it quite harshly. That was the first time the creature disobeyed him, and the last he had seen it in many years. Now it was back, and it didnt look too happy to see him. The man stared into the creatures one good eye, a sparkling shade of green, and smiled.
"Welcome home my son."
Tic...toc...Tic...toc...CRASH...toc................
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:04 pm
So, how is it? Good, bad, ugly, inbetween?
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Ebil-NekoCat Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:49 pm
I liked it! Especially the end, with his son and all.
The "tic-tocking" helped add a sort of suspenceful feel to it, and I was also sad for the dad. Overall, I felt it was an emotionally engaging story.
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 7:53 pm
Ah. Did you get the CRASH part?
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Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 11:56 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:58 pm
I'm getting a team of buddies together to vote on their favorites, because I know you both and don't want my rating to accidentally come out biased.
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Ebil-NekoCat Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:19 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:22 pm
*swats Embers head* Stop trying to bribe the judge. Alright Ebil, we await your decision.
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Ebil-NekoCat Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:49 pm
I announce the winner!
There was a vote between the vise captains, and it was unanimous: Siegfried is the winner! Congrats!
Look out for the upcoming writing contest, and thanks for the scary stories! We all enjoyed them!
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:51 pm
But I Made You s**t Bricks.>_<
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:52 pm
Rock on! *raises hand in victory* What do I win?
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