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Kingdom Hearts: Origins of Darkness

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 11:45 am


CHAPTER 1

The sun had just risen for the day, and Radiant Garden was settling in with the presence of the morning. Shadows on the ground created by the sunlight began to appear, but not in the way that you would normally assume. The shadows began to rise from the pavement streets of the town and form into…creatures? They turned into creatures of all different shapes and sizes. There were large, round creatures, small, tiny creatures, and many more. These creatures were called Heartless. Many people had thought that Sora, the master of the Keyblade, had done away with the existence of the Heartless when he destroyed Xemnas. Unfortunately, those people were incorrect. To make things worse, Traverse Town wasn’t the only world in which the Heartless were reappearing.

“THE HEARTLESS?!”
“Didn’t we destroy these things already?!”
“I…I guess not, Donald…”
“Well, then, I guess we have to remind ‘em who’s boss!”
“Are ya sure? I mean, Sora’s not with us, and Your Majesty’s missing again, and---”
“They’re surrounding us! Let’s get ‘em, Goofy!”
With that, Donald had whipped out his staff and charged at a pack of Heartless. Goofy held up his shield and followed behind. “Gawrsh, Donald, are ya sure we should be doing this?” Goofy asked nervously, his voice cracking as he began to face off with a round, plump Heartless that was twice his size.
“It’s all we can do if we don’t wanna become Heartless bait!” Donald replied, bopping a tiny Heartless on the head with his staff.
Donald Duck and Goofy Goof were two toons who lived to serve their beloved leader, King Mickey Mouse, and protect their kingdom, the Disney Castle. They had met Sora in Traverse Town a while back, and the three became unlikely friends. They had all worked together to do what they thought had destroyed the Heartless.

Just as things were going haywire with Donald and Goofy at the Disney Castle, things were just as crazy in Radiant Garden. Yuffie and Leon, two long-time villagers in Radiant Garden, were hiding out in an alley, watching in horror as the Heartless reappeared right before their very eyes. Yuffie was in sort of a shock at the sight, while Leon had his sword in hand, trying to determine whether to go and attack the Heartless.
“They’re…back. OK. I officially hate Sora’s guts,” Yuffie declared, “He promised to destroy those things, and I had thought he did, but did he? NO.”
“OK, calm down,” Leon told her, “They were gone for a while, weren’t they? I’m sure Sora did his best. He’s a good kid.” He took a deep breath, and was about to leave and try to fight the Heartless off, until Yuffie started complaining again.
“I don’t see how they could’ve returned! I hate them!” she complained. Yuffie turned to Leon. “Come on, Leon! You’re a tough guy! You’ve fought with tough guys like Cloud Strife before, and it’s as if you’re tough, just like them!” Leon was not pleased with the remark.
“So, now you’re saying I’m weak, huh?” Leon grimaced, “Well then! If you want those Heartless gone so bad, why don’t YOU go out there and fight?”
Yuffie sighed. “Oh, silly Leon,” she commented, “You know I just had my nails done.”

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:32 am


Yay, u posted it! I like it, although, Yuffie never stuck me as the kind of girl to care much about things like her nails...but otherwise i think this is pretty good 3nodding

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xXkitty-rikuXx

PostPosted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 12:23 pm


Yay, I posted! xd
Yeah, the thing with Yuffie...I tried to put a bit of a spin on the character. Thought it was humorous and such.

Wait for a couple more comments, and I'll post chapter 2. 3nodding
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