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How 'bout You (I'm Fine)

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xFionaxCeex

PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:53 pm


okay guys, this is my first song, i've never really been much of a songwriter, i'm better with the music side but here goes

(comments please)

How ‘bout you (I’m Fine)

Y’say you love me
But that’s not fair
‘Cos a week from now
There’s nothing there
You’re sick of me,
Of who I am
That’s fine ‘cos I
Don’t give a damn…

{CHORUS}
I’m doing just fine,
Without you…
And I’m feeling okay,
With someone new…
Yes, I’m moving ahead,
With something to do…
I’m moving on fine,
How ‘bout you…

4 months have gone
Like a blinking eye
You sink down and down
I touch the sky
You try to hide
Your deep regret
I act as if
We never met…

{CHORUS}
And I’m doing just fine,
Without you…
And I’m feeling okay,
With someone new…
Yes, I’m moving ahead,
With something to do…
I’m moving on fine,
How ‘bout you…

{BRIDGE}
And we meet in the street
And you’re lookin’ at me
And I’m thinking about
How we used to be
All the things that we did
All the good and the bad
And you’re taking my hand
And it’s making me sad
Look at how much we’ve changed
While we were apart
Do I just walk away
Or do I give you my heart?

{CHORUS2}
I think that I’m fine
Without you…
Can’t make up my mind
What do I do?
I can’t move ahead
‘Til I know the truth…
I love you again
How ‘bout you…?
PostPosted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:08 pm


It has a very nice rhythm 3nodding

ViRabbit

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