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 Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 3:56 am
Yes, I've decide to follow the stream, dont be shy I can handle critic
If someone want to see more you can click this link This one^^
So here we go^^
Unspoken
- Hey, let's do something
-Like what?
We could shot stars down from the sky and
Wish for each other
We could sail on the forgotten wave from last spring
and hold each others hand to not fall of
we could make love in the cathedral of darkness
run out in the rain and cry when it's not showing
we could compete with the sun beams
about who lights up the world the most
(and you'll win, no doubt about it, at least in my world)
we could give each other the warmth
no one else wants to give us
the kiss that I hope
one day will come
-Maybe take a walk or something?
- isn't it a bit late for a walk?
-yeah I guess it is
Anorexia (scared)
and he is silently whispering that he loves her
but she cant believe him
because he never touches her anymore
he is afraid she will break
even though he wants her
and she hears him crying at night
when he drags his fingers along her back
where the angel wings soon will be
He has to see her disappearing
and he looks terrified
when he have been in the bathroom after her
and he sees how much hair she has lost
he is the silent witness to her decay
and his pleading eyes says it all
about sorrow
when they sit around the kitchen table
he has to watch the one he loves the most commit a slow suicide
Dear Ana
she gave you her body
and her life
and her agony
please don't take him away from her
Psycho child
[4 years, Church's daycare]
No just go, She has to learn to be away from her parents
No mommy, dont go. Please dont go!
[6 years, first grade]
Your daughter sits and a corner most of the time, and she cant sew, It has to be something wrong with her
Why doesn't anybody come to me? Why does everybody leave?
[9 years, 4th grade]
You have to help us. Your daughters arms and legs has weird scratches – Do you have violent pets?
Help me, cant you hear all the voices? Those who commands me to destroy!
[11 years, 6th grade]
It seems to have happend something with your daughter. She doesn't speak anymore
Please come and speak to me. I'm so lonely!
[14 years, 8th grade]
It seem like your daughter don't like her appearance anymore
Didn't you hear him say how ugly I was?
[16 years, 9th grade]
Your daughter dont seem to have any friends in school,are she one of those that hides?
If I get invisible do the comments stop coming?
[17 years, 10th grade]
Oh my, your daughter has gotten so skinny – does she have anorexia?
I just want to be beautiful for you, cant you see that?
[18 years, 11th grade]
We have found some Prozac in you daughters bag, is she a drug addict?
I use the false happiness to please you
But in you eyes I'll always be a psycho-child
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 1:36 pm
woah... thats really interesting...
do you have anorexia?
*huggles*
i dont want you to die gonk
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 2:08 pm
How closely does this resemble you Ketake?
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:41 pm
@ Metallic; I dont think I have ana... I'm not completly sure but I think I have some kind of EDNOS
I'm not gonna die, promise*huggles back*
@Green; Some parts more then other, almost noting is completly true but parts of it...
Hmm... that's wierd, I didn't put my 2 favourites up... didn't think of that rolleyes
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Master of Your Thoughts Crew
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 4:48 am
o_0....alright, this is scary. All the poetry people put up here is good. Not that i'm complaining, it's still all cool. But eh coincedence is amazing......congrats, Ketake, on being such a good poet.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2005 10:54 am
Thinkmaster o_0....alright, this is scary. All the poetry people put up here is good. Not that i'm complaining, it's still all cool. But eh coincedence is amazing......congrats, Ketake, on being such a good poet. Well... thank you.. I think^^
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Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:29 am
Dad I know
Dad, I know
I don't know why
But I know what you did
I was in the next room
Heard her cry after you left
She knew that I knew
But we never said anything
Dad, I know
I know how you ripped us apart
I can still hear her cry at night
I can still hear your footsteps outside my door
Dad, I know
The leaves are falling now
It's getting cold
The rain is dripping down the window
Such as the tears are dripping down my cheeks
Dad, I know
You know
Everybody knows
Everybody knows why she's gone now
The blood dripped down her arms
Her life dripped down on the floor
Dad, I know.
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 6:52 am
s omuch etter than what i can do
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Posted: Wed Aug 23, 2006 6:53 pm
Holy s**t. Those are awesome. I love it when you can read a poem, and feel the emotion in them. And girl, you've got that down.
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