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 Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:29 am
I'm an emotional wreck
Of a glass boat
Held in my own hand
Slicing away flesh
Revealing what's truly underneath my skin
You
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:31 am
...slightly creepy. But interesting, very interesting. O.o
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:37 am
oOo-Az-oOo ...slightly creepy. But interesting, very interesting. O.o emo Creepy? crying How about this one? Senseless... Cents-less, I wander though wonder-inspired ponds and ponder cruel transpired expiration. Perspiration clings, inhalation stings, left breathless...
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:40 am
Great poem, I agree with Az its interesting.
They say how some people get under your skin, the poem shows that, if what I said makes sense :p
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:41 am
xxkathrynxx Great poem, I agree with Az its interesting. They say how some people get under your skin, the poem shows that, if what I said makes sense :p 3nodding Indeed. Like the following poem, they each hit instantaneously, leaving me no room for edit. heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:46 am
oOo-Az-oOo @Ooms: I'm sorry! sweatdrop It's not creepy, actually, it's good! ^^'
Okay, the second one.
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It's good. I mean, that's a really interesting technique you've used there. Can't say I've ever seen it before. sweatdrop Don't thank me... *taps temple* ... scream blame him!! *points accusing finger at squirrel in tree* xd Wonderful wording, Az!! heart "Thou shalt be befriended". xd Epic. heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:48 am
Ooms Farlow xxkathrynxx Great poem, I agree with Az its interesting. They say how some people get under your skin, the poem shows that, if what I said makes sense :p 3nodding Indeed. Like the following poem, they each hit instantaneously, leaving me no room for edit. heart A clever choice of words, wish I could write peoms like that :p
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:52 am
xxkathrynxx Ooms Farlow xxkathrynxx Great poem, I agree with Az its interesting. They say how some people get under your skin, the poem shows that, if what I said makes sense :p 3nodding Indeed. Like the following poem, they each hit instantaneously, leaving me no room for edit. heart A clever choice of words, wish I could write peoms like that :p sweatdrop Yes. Same goes with My Story... It seems to just formulate within the inky black thoughtpool processor I call a machine of great wonder... eek ... stare or brain, to be trite. xd emo Sadly, I must depart, but know this... THIS IS THE BEST GUILD EVER!! stare Dead serious. MPL blows. whee I'm removing myself from the other guilds and making this my primary. 3nodding heart Thank you, xxkathrynxx!! whee heart I'll return.
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:06 pm
scream I shall return!! twisted Await my arrival. heart
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:16 pm
Joins the waiting line >.<
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:35 pm
yours is nice i like to rhyme in mine XD
As I speak seaming sweetly
Drifting dreams where no one sees me
Forgotten time merely drifting
Forgotten dreams just a shifting
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Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:38 pm
Ryminiscent yours is nice i like to rhyme in mine XD
As I speak seaming sweetly
Drifting dreams where no one sees me
Forgotten time merely drifting
Forgotten dreams just a shifting Aw sweet poem ><
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