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Blind Messiah

PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 9:10 pm


((before this is thrown completley open, i want to say in all caps NICK ISNT DEAD YET. This is set in the future. im not going to say how long in the future it is. if any staff members object to this kind of thread then by all means remove it right away. And yes the title had to be misleading, its been a while since i felt like i almost made nate s**t himself, gotta keep him on his toes. biggrin Now, onto the meat of the subject. Everyone should try to stick to 1-3 posts. i have a lil story in my head that will of course lead up to this thread in which all can just post to there hearts desire, so no forcing some history on my charecter without sending me a pm and me ok'in it first, or i swear to lanzer...))

In a small church on a hill an elderly man sits in a redwood coffin. He's wearing a military uniform, and his completley grey hair has been combed in a 50's style wave. Besides the crosshaven resident in attendence There is a younger man, probobly 27 to look at him, in a black suit. He looks completley aloof of the situation, as if he has somthing he has to get to. With the man is a girl, only six or so, in a white satin dress. She tugs on the man's pant leg a few times and says in a voice that is quickly approaching tears, "Daddy why isnt he moving?" She asks again a few times before he Shush's her in a manner to say, 'be quiet or ill flail you within an inch of your life.' A military man is standing to the side, with a small squad of men, all in dress uniform's and carrying ceremonial rifles. Other than the man, the girl, and the military brass, all of the people here live in crosshaven.

((this is going to remain open for comments and the like until christmas night, so do and say anything BEFORE then.))
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 1:36 pm


Dark_truth
its been a while since i felt like i almost made nate s**t himself, gotta keep him on his toes.


sweatdrop exclaim sweatdrop


((Mission accomplished! ::wonders how far in the future, and who the other people are:: ))

Nathanael Nevermore
Captain


Sarah Kirk
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 1:48 pm


As a side note I will like to add that I also had a severe asma attack as a result of the title in this thread. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 3:59 pm


((*is fainted, foaming at the mouth* gonk You seem to have a talent for these things...))

Aylen


Blind Messiah

PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:04 pm


*maliciously evil pride* twisted *wants to see the actions the people will be making*
PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 8:13 pm


Dressed in black silk, Avice bit her lip trying not to cry. Bringing her handkerchief to her eyes, she stared at the casket with regret in her eyes. "He was a good man. I wish I knew him better." She whispered to how not even the man standing next to her could her. More tears got swapped away and Avice turned to leave the church so that she could actually breathe.

trixterschoice


Thrudd

PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 11:18 am


(( I had just finished reading the - other thread - and I felt like was out of the loop way too long ... Very well done by the way.

If it is all right I will add a tentative character cameo with dangling threads and enough lack of focus to avoid painting any corners))



The doors at the back cracked open just enough to allow a figure to furtively sidle in before easing the door closed once more.
Most of the participants were quite and sombre; some trying to staunch welling tears.
The focus of their attention was not at the speaker at the lectern but the one quietly at rest within the solidly built wooden coffin at the front of the room.

The girl, still dressed in her school uniform, turns her head sidelong to whisper something to the emptiness beside her.

Are you sure this is OK with you?

She seems to be listening for an answer and then nods her head in agreement to whatever response she received.
Scanning the rooms occupants once she then quietly sidled out the way the had entered so as not to disturb the sombre atmosphere.
Those happening to look to where she stood earlier would for a moment, through a trick of the light, see what appeared to be a very youthful version of the man lying in state.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 8:49 pm


A woman sits in the church, dabbing at tears with a ragged but clean handkerchief. She appears to possibly be in her very early middle age, despite the lack of a single wrinkle or blemish. She wears a black dress that has been repaired time and again, so nuch that one or two places appear to be more black thread than dress. But it isn't tattered, the obvious care that has gone into it dispels any doubt that the garment is not stately enough to wear at such an occasion. Her hair, a deep rich gray that must be her natural color, is pulled up into a respectful bun.

A few there recognize her and know how old she really is, and what a tragedy it is that those around her that she knows well have aged so while she remains almost untouched by time. The rest wonder quietly to themselves in some small corner of their mind who this young woman is and how she knew the old man in the casket.

The_Errand_Girl
Crew


Nathanael Nevermore
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2005 1:35 pm


Of the once famous boy governor, there has come a good, quiet family man. He is flanked by two children, a boy with red hair, a girl with orange. They knew the man in the casket as though he were family. He lifts up the girl, who is too small to see over, and she kisses the deceased goodbye. The boy kisses the forehead stoically and almost mechanically. It is his first encounter with death, and he is taking in every detail, from the peaceful expression on the face of the corpse, to the flower arrangements with sympathy cards.

Their father slips down to one knee, and bows his head, then looks up as though he can see through the roof and into the heavens. The children are shocked; they have never seen their father cry.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 3:27 am


In the paper, it didn't say how the old fart died.

So Hollow figures he took the coward's way out.

The pretty young woman with him moves her fingers in sign language to ask him something private between the two of them.

To her, he replies:
It amounts to becoming nothing. To having been strong and solid once, and melting like snow.

Ho!!ow


Aylen

PostPosted: Fri Dec 09, 2005 3:39 pm


A flame-haired teenager wearing an impassive expression on his face was leaning against the back wall. He wasn't exactly invited, but he lived nearby and he couldn't resist finding out what could have drawn together such a large crowd with such sadness hanging over them. Chewing gum, he blew it out and let it burst with a loud pop. He didn't know the guy, but judging from the emotions emanating from the crowd, he had been well loved. Uncrossing his arms, he left the building. He had seen death too much already for it to hold much meaning for him. People die. That was just how it was. Death wasn't important, what was important was how the guy had lived. Obviously, he had lived a full and happy life for so many to show up and mourn for him. The lid of the garbage can closed with a bang as he disposed of the gum. The teen grinned. He could only hope he would make as much of an impression on Crosshaven as that man had.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 1:29 am


A comforting soft white hand grasped the kneeling man's shoulder lovingly from behind. Her Jade eyes, fixed on the body before her, sparkle with hot burning tears. Her mind drifts to the late nights she used to have dinner with what they called back then, their demented family. How the four of them had chatted and joked happily savoring treats from whom she thought of the best chef in the world. They had been truly happy in those long ago moments, but that had been the very beginning of the time she got to spend with him, how she treasured those moments still. She bowed her head slightly as hot tears began to stream steadily down her cheeks her face obscured by her red hair which seemed all the more fiery against the black of her shirt. She walks closer to the casket touching his hand slightly, then kisses her old friends forehead whispering something for only the two of them to know. She looks down at the two children standing by her side now and smiles warmly wiping her tears away softly. She doesn't seem sad anymore but confident she will see him again some day.

Sarah Kirk
Crew


Ho!!ow

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:26 am


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