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jaded_and_tainted Captain
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 Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 5:32 pm
Here is where you can critique someones work. Please reference each piece of Art you critique with the Title. EVERYONES A CRITIC!!!!! razz
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Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:49 pm
I know someone out there is waiting for someone to post something in here so here is one of my works.. Feel free to sink your fangs in and tell me all the horrid sh*t wrong with it >:3 SKULLZ by satan
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:29 pm
It looks good, nice and clean lineart, good coloring effect on the eyes. The only thing I would have changed is the color inside the mouth of the skull in the center. I'd have colored it dark, like the area above the eyes, to give a depth impression.
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 3:04 pm
Plus, you painted the nose hole dark, so technically, the mouth cavity should be equally dark. ^^
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Kiro_Shinigami
Kiro_Shinigami
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:23 pm
I do avi art and am in the arena. I really liked this art piece and it took me a while to make.
what do you think?Alruna
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:51 pm
Wow, that's really awesome! I love the pose and the facial expression. Also, the coloring is great.
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:53 pm
Umrae Plus, you painted the nose hole dark, so technically, the mouth cavity should be equally dark. ^^ Yeah I was thinking about coloring that in but i couldn't deiced if it would look good or not =P
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:54 pm
Umrae Wow, that's really awesome! I love the pose and the facial expression. Also, the coloring is great. I agree with Umrae
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:59 pm
I'm more of a pixelart artist.
http://umrae.deviantart.com/art/My-witchling-gaia-avatar-126089307
http://umrae.deviantart.com/art/Tallecia-in-pixel-art-74879751
What do you think about them?
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:02 pm
satanizmihomedog Umrae Wow, that's really awesome! I love the pose and the facial expression. Also, the coloring is great. I agree with Umrae
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Kiro_Shinigami
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Kiro_Shinigami
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:06 pm
Another one im not sure i got the anatomi correct. Its a gaian art piece that a friend donated me a dark halo for heart (forgot to dub the last one "everyone's a critic sorry about that) Everyone's a critic
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:11 pm
It looks good. Anatomy is fine, is the coat's folds/fit on the right arm that looks a little weird. Still, overall, I like it.
One thing I would have done differently is I wouldn't have blurred the pitchfork. I would have copied it to a different layer on top of it, blurred the frame and left the pitchfork sharpened. It would look like it was coming out of the picture.
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Kiro_Shinigami
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:16 pm
Umrae It looks good. Anatomy is fine, is the coat's folds/fit on the right arm that looks a little weird. Still, overall, I like it. One thing I would have done differently is I wouldn't have blurred the pitchfork. I would have copied it to a different layer on top of it, blurred the frame and left the pitchfork sharpened. It would look like it was coming out of the picture.
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Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 5:18 pm
Oh, I bet he did, it's a cool picture.
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Kiro_Shinigami
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:55 pm
Newest art made its me dream avatar! xd ....i'll never be able to afford the stuff she wears but i can draw em biggrin My avatar
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