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 Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:50 pm
This one was written to win a girl's heart.
C'est bon?
Falling falling this light that strikes,
Chilly touch of eternal dawn,
Fire rushing through veins ignite,
For such a thing there is no law
The first warmth reaches deep,
Great nature's mountain before my eyes
Awaken from a steiner sleep,
Slope graces thee from earthen ties,
Deep in glory orbs of glass,
lays that which draws the heart,
is stronger than a breath of rain,
How could there be so bright an art,
Have you ever heard the full moon sing,
The excitement of a golden hart,
looks like I've been struck Laurie
by your ever sweeter burning dart
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:12 pm
Awwwwwwwwwww! As a girl, I was required to say that... it really was sweet. I've never met a guy who wrote poetry for their crushes or if i have, they never wrote any for me.... lol. How did she react?
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 8:11 am
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Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:36 pm
as the guys at school would say, "nice..."
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