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PostPosted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 6:02 pm


I was watching the movie "Throw Momma From the Train" the other day, and it occurred to me to try and write a good novel with the beginning sentence "the night was humid". any ideas? post them here. Also, I would love constructive criticism.
here's mine: The night was humid. I remember that, along with a few small details too insignificant to be forgotten. I don't know how it happened. Maybe we both wondered...wondered about this stage of life unknown to both of us. If we hadn't been there on that August evening an eternity ago, maybe nothing would've happened. We wouldn't have met. And I wouldn't be sitting here, looking back on that night and thinking how niave I was. But we were. We did. And here I am.
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I've never seen that movie. But I have heard of it. And as for your request not to sound mean or rude, that could be the first sentence in any book. Anything from a child's book to (not to be crude) an "adult" novel. D8

So what are you more looking for? Sci fi? Fantacy? Romance? Comedy?

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:35 pm


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I've never seen that movie. But I have heard of it. And as for your request not to sound mean or rude, that could be the first sentence in any book. Anything from a child's book to (not to be crude) an "adult" novel. D8

So what are you more looking for? Sci fi? Fantacy? Romance? Comedy?


idrc, as long as it's good
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