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DuvalSunset10 Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:35 pm
I wrote this a while back. its free verse. tell me what you think.
I cry
I hear one thing
I cry
I hear another
I cry more
Not sure of what to believe anymore
My heart is split
It can’t tell the truth anymore
I hear lies that sound like truth
My heart tells me “Be done with it.”
My mind says “Leave it be.”
I try to be nice about it, but it all comes out wrong.
And I lose some very valuable people
People that I won’t know what to do without…
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:51 pm
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DuvalSunset10 Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:28 pm
thanks, for the very good part. lol. idk what it is, but when i wrote something sad, my readers feel how sad it is....
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 9:49 pm
you're going to make me cry, chicky!
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DuvalSunset10 Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 4:46 pm
awe, chicky, dont cry! i dont want that to happen!
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