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onion ring rabbit Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:28 pm
this is for those of us who write songs. share ideas and give helpful feedback on others song lyrics.
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:23 am
oh my god, that is such an awesome idea! why didn't i think of that? *haha*, jk.
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onion ring rabbit Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 10:40 pm
pools of sorrow
drown me in this emptiness
breaking hearts like porcelain dolls
like these pills who needs them all?
help me cause im going down...
much further than anyone should!
help me cause im going down...
pull this trigger, if you could!
blow away these bad memories!
make the angels come to stay! 2x
cause im falling, away from you!----
and theres nothing!,that i can do!
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Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 8:56 pm
ok, so i'm going to post all my old songs from my tokyopop account. (i've got a new one too. but i'm waiting on something before posting it. wink there's 8 of them. and, i'll post them all over like today and tomorrow in order of when they uploaded to tp.) thanx! and, have fun!hey baby, tell me
tell me on this starry night
tell me that it's finally right
tell me you're into it
tell me you're feelin' it
tell me whatchu won't admit
okay, that's enough!
nuff play, nuff talk
save your words and show me
show me you're ready
tell me whatchu really feel
tell me what i wanna hear
show me whatchu can do
show me thatchu can move
i've waited for it all day
and now i think it's time to play
so c'mon putcher phone away
get up close to me
and tell me!
tell me on this starry night
tell me that it's finally right
tell me you're into it
tell me you're feelin' it
tell me whatchu won't admit
so baby, tell me
tell me why yer hands aren't on me
tell me that's yer finally ready
tell me now's the time
tell me i've found the perfect rhyme
tell me on this starry night
tell me that it's finally right
tell me you're into it
tell me you're feelin' it
tell me whatchu won't admit
tell me yer gonna give it to me
tell me on this starry night
tell me before daylight
show me whatchu wanna do
show me thatchu can move
so baby, tell me
tell me on this starry night
tell me we're gettin' tight
tell me i'll score tonight
tell me... tell me... tell me... date uploaded: 02/12/08. date actually written: no idea. it's in a book somewhere.
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Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 9:17 pm
links!!!! (i totally forgot. sweatdrop )Losin' Timeevery day i wake up
and every day i die
in between...
something hasta happen
i hafta try
this depression, it wouldn't last
if every day, i took a chance
can't say exactly,
what's on my mind
i'm just losing
losin' time
i can't stay here
ta scream and tear
about what i'm missin'
let's make it wort it
let's make it last
becuase forever will soon be past
they always tell us
slow down, ya got time
then it's gone
when they blink their eyes
i can't stay here
ta scream and tear
about what i'm missin'
i'm losin' time
gotta keep movin' on
look toward the skys
say my goodbyes
i could sit here forever
and contemplate
but then my moves'll
be too late
i can't stay here
ta scream and tear
about what i'm missin'
ya just need ta listen
gotta go after it
gotta hunt it down
nobody can give it to e
i can't just sit around
gotta make it mine
'cause i'm losin' time
i can sit
and i can stay
and learn to
regret every day
but tonight
we're gonna make it right
and treasure every second
of our time
we'll use every day
'cause...
i can't stay here
ta scream and tear
about what i'm missin'
'cause i'm usin'
my time date uploaded: 02/12/08
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Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:43 am
kinda cool. this is actually about fictional characters. smile Lookin' For An AngelKnew a boy, nuthin' ever satisfied
He had a warm heart, a cool touch and big, big eyes
He was always lookin' for what they didn't see
Hopin' for what they said wasn't real
Searchin', waitin', kind and patient
He wasn't vain or conceded
Just knew what he needed
Always lookin' for an angel!
He had no idea, no clue,
Just what it was angels do
When he saw her that day,
He couldn't the ways
The power and strength
A winged, feathered creature
could posses
She was wild tresses and evil grins
She had long, black nails and lots of skin
She was his everything
She was perfection to the tee
and every guys' fantasy
She was fire and ice, silver and gold
I swear no one could ever hold...
Her
A gift from the gods,
sent down from heaven
He knew there was nuthin' better
than anything they could ever
think up, fantasize or create
imagine, envision or c-generate
He knew what he was doin'
When he lookin' for that girl
from a total other world
Sunkissed euphoria
She set aglow everything she touched.
In a hundred years, he couldn't get enough.
She set hearts a flutter and a flight.
She could make everything good and right.
She can set beasts free and fulfill all your needs.
She can keep disaster away.
She keeps sadness and depression at bay.
She's a luck charm,
to keep you away from harm.
A four leaf clover, turned ten times over.
He knew there was nuthin' better
No other woman could ever
Be like a
Look like a
Fly like an angel!
He knew one thing:
If ya go lookin' for an angel
ya know you're gonna find out
What it's like
What she's like
What she can do
What you can do
What can happen
When you're with
When you still
When you believe
When you know
When you see
When you have
What it is you need
Angels!
'Cause if ya go lookin' for angel
ya know you're gonna find out
'Cause if ya go lookin' for angel
ya know you're gonna find out,
'Cause if ya go lookin' for angel
ya know you're gonna find one. uploaded: 02/24/08
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 1:49 pm
it's kinda interesting. since i've been 10, my approach to writing songs hasn't changed. even if my other writing has totally changed. the content still flips around a little, but never the way i approach it, even the kinds of songs hasn't changed.I wonder/you wonder I wonder if you wonder,
why I've been so quiet lately
I wonder what you think's been
goin' on in my head
I wonder if you've noticed
how I've been lookin' dead
I wonder if you've seen
the pills under my bed
I wonder what you see
When you look right though me
I wonder if you wonder
Why I act so sedately
It's been two days
since I last spoke
Or was it three? I can't recall
I don't remember walking here
or why
I wonder, could you tell me the date and time?
I wonder if you've seen
the bags under my eyes
I don't remember where I got
this stain on my shirt
I don't remember
what ripped my skirt
I wonder if you wonder
about my glassy-eyed stare
TV blaring on my dirty apartment floor
as the mail piles up under my door
Have you seen my purse?
I think I might have left them with my purse
Last night I laid in my bed
Try'na rid these thoughts from my head
And at last I got up
Start another lousy day
Once again, I got nuthin' to say
I wonder if you wonder
why my bathroom mirror's smashed
I wonder if you wonder
What happened to the girl
with bright eyes and big dreams
I know I do
I wonder if you wonder
What happened to the passion
that radiated in every breath she took
Some say she was beaten down
Others say she stopped trying
I wonder if we'll ever know
And worse yet
I wonder if you wonder uploaded: 02/25/08
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:29 pm
lmao. ok, nobody hate me. (or, go ahead. idc.) i wrote this as a total joke. someone, who liked this person who worked in computers, made the mistake of asking me what e-sex was. IT IS A TOTAL JOKE. and, yes, i got permission before posting it. but, anyway, read on, and have fun!It's Called E-sex My niece misspells all her words,
'cause she's havin' e-sex on her keyboard
Clear the desk so she lie down and daydream of your face
Later her thoughts, will be in a different place
La, la, la
Her underpants're dirty
La, la, la
Her words're slurry
Bad, bad girl!
Poor Kiana
She couldn't get
some in the real word
She figures this guy'll do
If only he'd like her too
Cyber-sex, cyber-sex!
Get whatever you want
At four in the morn'
Too lonely for inflatables
Too soft for porn
So she's got some guy
to type sweet nothings in her ear
and tell her, how great is her rear
Smut, smut, smut!
What a
Slut, slut, slut!
She can't hear too well
with your boxers on her head
She better put 'em
back under her bed
La, la, la
My nice misspells all her words,
'cause she's havin' e-sex on her keyboard
(more than i got tonight) uploaded: 02/27/08
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:36 pm
do not f** around with this song! rawr! *haha* jk. but seriously, this one is real close to me. not that the others aren't. but, some more than others, obvioulsy. smile Just Another GirlI don't wanna be just another girl
Just another girl like everyone
Just another like all the rest
I wanna be different
I wanna be the best!
I don't wanna be just another girl
Just an ordinary, common girl
Just a regular girl in the world
Just another girl in the whole, wide world
I don't wanna be just another girl
Just like the girl next door
I wan't a whole lot more
'Cause I'm not just another girl
I don't wanna, I refuse, no!
I won't be just another girl!
I don't wanna be just another girl!
Don't look at me!
Don't label me!
I'm not a pedigree!
'Cause I'm not just another girl
I don't wanna, I refuse, no!
I won't be just another girl!
I don't wanna be just another girl!
I don't wanna be just another girl
Just another girl like you and her
No, that would be so much worse
There's gotta be more underneath
There's gotta be more to me!
'Cause I'm not just another girl
I don't wanna, I refuse, no!
I won't be just another girl!
I don't wanna be just another girl!
'Cause I know, I'm not just another girl
I know, I have a whole lot more
I can do and I can give
So much, while I live
'Cause I'm not just another girl
I don't wanna be just another girl
Just another girl!
Just another girl!
Nooo! I'm not just another girl! uploaded: 03/05/08
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:42 pm
this is a really beautiful song, obviously inspired my another really beautiful song. and, as long as i've liked both songs, there was someone that recently, sang the 1st one to me. a beautiful coincidence.My Magic Carpet RideThis is my magic carpet ride
My mystical journey through and through
Come with me, I'll share it with you
To go all the way inside
On my magic carpet ride
Visit another world, from the other side
This is my chance to explore
Places filled with trinkets and lore
High past this blue sky
Deep underneath the sea
On my magic carpet ride!
Come, take the tour, see what they've made
Opportunity knocks, before destiny is laid
Who knows what we'll find?
And we'll leave the rest behind
Come on my magic carpet ride!
This is my one time, one chance
To talk to fish, to ride on a dragon's back
To go on this ride, I don't want your money
No toll, I won't ask a fee
This is bigger and purer than that
If you want to come with me
You must have the heart of a dreamer
And the soul to persue
That's what you'll need
To be included on this night
And join my magic carpet ride!
No place to run, no place to hide
From this supernatural light
This is my magic carpet ride!
Visit another world, from the the side
This is my chance to explore
Places filled with trinkets and lore
High past this blue sky
Deep underneath the sea
On my magic carpet ride!
Hike the tallest mountains
Plunge the lowest valleys
Together, we'll take this dive
On my magic carpet ride!
Shh...! Let's leave before the sun will rise
Fly away on my magic carpet ride! uploaded: 04/18/08
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Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:47 pm
biggrin . last one! for now! this is like, one of my only real slow songs. it's a kind of lullabye. (yes, the title is different here. i haven't changed it at tp yet. not sure if i should.)Sleep Is Forever the EnemyI don't wanna go ta sleep
I just wanna feel rested
I don't wanna beat you...
I just want you bested
I don't wanna close my eyes
But, I dunno how...to make this sun rise
I don't wanna lay my head down
I just wanna lounge somewhere...around
I don't wanna lay my head down
I know we'll never be like this again
I don't wanna let my hair down
I know we'll never feel like this again
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I just wanna feel rested
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I don't wanna go ta sleep
Twitter birds in our heads have rested
I don't want you...to open my eyes
I told you, I like a surprise
I don't wanna lay down
I just wanna lounge on you
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I don't wanna be in the dark
Feeling around
I don't wanna lay down
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I don't wanna lay my head down
I'll never know what's wrong with me
I don't wanna go ta sleep
And I know, how this must be
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I just wanna feel at ease
I don't wanna go ta sleep
I don't wanna go ta sleep, no
I just wanna feel rested uploaded: 04/22/09
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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:20 pm
Oreo's gloriously emo-erotic new song!
never written anything for someone before. wow...MissingI drink all the while you're away
I know you love seeing my heels, click and sway
I want to hold you so bad
I want to stop my dreams from holdin' back
Come fill up this hole that's been tearin' in my heart
My soul's dyin' 'cause the stars, so beautiful, keep us apart
Put the puzzle pieces of my brain back in order
Can't stand being away from you any longer
I gave you the key, now you have to do the rest
Need your touch to resuscitate the organs in my chest
I don't care about tomorrow if you're here tonight
I wouldn't care about my sorrows if i could borrow your sight
Come fill up this hole that's been tearin' in my heart
My soul's dyin' 'cause the stars, so beautiful, keep us apart
Put the puzzle pieces of my brain back in order
Can't stand being away from you any longer
Sittin' on the roof, planning our escape
Like kids on the balcony, we left in such a haste
I care so much
Even though you can't see my mistakes
I wanna kiss you in the rain but it isn't fair
When i go to sleep at night, you're not there
Come fill up this hole that's been tearin' in my heart
My soul's dyin' 'cause the stars, so beautiful, keep us apart
Put the puzzle pieces of my brain back in order
Can't stand being away from you any longer uploaded: 10/13/09
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:13 am
new song!!! December Rain It's freezing baby
Oh, but I'm barely breathing baby
As I watch the december rain
In the cold
I know you can feel my pain
I know you wish you could hold (me)
Kinda like anticipating April showers
I could stand and watch the rain for hours
Holidays'll come 'n' go
But they'll be no Xmas cheer
I need you to know
Not until I can feel you here
It's freezing baby
Oh, but you're barely breathing baby
And you know darn well...
As you watch the december rain
In the cold
You know I can feel your pain
You know I wish I could hold (you)
Another year'll come 'n' go
But it's another decade on a nightmare
I need you to know
Not until I can feel you here
It's freezing baby
Oh, but I'm barely breathing baby
As I watch the december rain
In the cold
I know you can feel my pain
I know you wish you could hold (me) uploaded (same day as finished): 12/05/09
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Posted: Fri Dec 18, 2009 10:09 pm
I wrote this in six grade... Don't brake my paper heart. I'm trying not to cry.Dont brake my paper heart, you said it not over but in your eyes I know its over. Dont break! dont break! my paper heart. i tried it fix it but you broke my heart to many times. Please dont call, please dont break my heart... I know, a LOT of typos... gonk
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