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mist777

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:53 pm


(Psst, this is a fan-fiction due to the fact that the settings are on the continents and there are mentions of characters, oh yeah, and it has multiple chapters. Comments are okay)

"You must be careful when you see someone from very far away. Especially so far, that someone is from beyond the stars," the teenage traveler told you, "Whether humanoid or not, they can cause you to agree to things that you don't want to do, especially if a threat from beyond those stars you see is also involved."
You listen, but while the city you were in was naturally that prone for travelers to come there, you remember that none of them were willing to tell a story such as this, so you urged her to continue.
The traveler smiled a bit, but it quickly disappeared as she continued. She told you, "I have heard of a tale where such a situation could have happened, but you see that it hasn't happened yet, but similar things happened to others and they were real. This tale however, started on a rumored uncharted continent."
With what little magic ability she had, she tried to make a visual. You had seen it a bit blurry, but you didn't complain, because the story was having good potential.
It all started on an uncharted continent on this planet. Unlike the other continents you've heard of, this one had been working on this thing called technology, taking it to levels unimaginable, when suddenly, on a very dark night, a streak of light headed there. It didn't crash, but it was a very strange machine, able to fly beyond the stars. A sort of cover pulled back, and when the steam and dust cleared, a girl came out. She looked to be your age, but had strange armor. She, looking like a human with armor, managed to tell them that her name was Mary Icewing, and that she told them that she came from a system called the Sar'pedden system, and of the possibilities of aliens hiding somewhere on that planet. Now, the natives of that continent were willing to help out by giving her a map. She then got into her machine and headed to the continent where the Kingdom you probably know of as Altea was. However, some time before she arrived, strange forces somehow got in during the dark of night. Mary Icewing found some machines of her enemies trying to take down the castle and she managed to stop them. Alas, the noise of the battle alerted the guards stationed there and they had her surrounded.
You then interrupt by asking if things were going to end the way they were before anyone from beyond the stars arrived.
"Please be patient, sir," the traveler replied before she was ready to continue. She then said, "Oh dear, the sun is setting."
You tried to convince the traveler to stay at your home, but she simply replied, "I can't, however, I'll come back next week to explain more of the story."
You finally agreed, but you couldn't wait to hear more of the story.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 3:18 pm


(Sorry for the delayed chapter. sweatdrop I'm sure that if you played enough, you can figure out where the current events are taking place. Okay, the characters that enter in current events, aka the part not in dark blue, are those I'm making up, just to clear the picture. Comments are okay.)

You waited and then noticed the traveler come back. She apologized for the late arrival and began to tell more of the story.
Turned out, one of the ones that heard the noise happened to have been Prince Marth, whom not only noticed the streak of light that happened when Mary Icewing arrived, but also followed the guards when they had gotten her surrounded. She told Marth and the guards about the situation, about the rumored aliens sneaking onto that planet somehow. After a short discussion, Marth allowed Mary Icewing to continue on and she gave him a communicator in case danger happened again. She hurried back to her vehicle and flew off to the next area.
However, the traveler was interrupted by some bullies throwing rocks at her. Someone you knew grabbed a big wooden block and he set it to block the rocks until the bullies stopped. One of them then said to the one that got the block in place, "Man, you seem to be even more annoying than some of those beorc."
The bullies left and you heard footsteps coming. The one that got the block there turned into a hawk and hid, waiting to see who it was. You gave a sigh of relief when it turned out to have only been one of the ones you knew. She then said, "I heard rocks being thrown so I came here to help."

"Yeah, well, I took care of it already," said the laguz that put the block there, "Say, any clue as to why they were tossing the rocks?"

You told them about the traveler telling the story and the two of them sat down to hear it. After giving a summary of what happened, the traveler continued.

Flying around in her strange machine, Mary Icewing was heading to another continent when she was attacked. The aliens that tried to destroy the castle at Altea attempted to stop the pilot in her tracks. She was dodging the blows they sent and she counterattacked, giving a clear sign to Roy and everyone else on the continent of Elibe that had seen the event that they weren't alone.
The traveler sighed when she noticed the sun setting. Although you and your friends wanted to hear more, the traveller promised to come back to tell more. After leaving, the laguz that came as the bullies left, Annia, then said, "That sure is a good story so far."

"Yeah," agreed the one that used the block as a shield, Anthony, "Let's come back so we can hear more."

You agree as well, then you, Annia, and Anthony each went separate ways for now.

mist777

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 04, 2009 2:08 pm


You noticed Anthony and Annia, but the traveler wasn't there at all. Annia then asked, "Think we should go find her this time?"

"Yeah," said Anthony, "It's about time for the three of us to go on an adventure."

You then decided to come with them, for you wanted to hear the story to. After packing supplies, you, Annia, and Anthony were heading off and out of town to find the traveller. At first however, you weren't sure if leaving Phoenicis was a good idea, but Annia then said, "Come on, we're prepared, aren't we? If someone tries to stop us, we'll tell them that we're not there to fight, but to find someone we suspect might be in danger."

Anthony then said, "As long as we don't start the fight, we'll be alright."

You, Annia, and Anthony had made quite good progress when Annia dragged you behind a tree and Anthony joined you. Anthony then whispered, "Who's there?"

Annia looked, but then whispered back, "Looks like one of the beorc, we are at the border you know."

You then whispered that maybe they should make camp for the night, and after the beorc that was there left, Annia and Anthony agreed. Setting up some tents, you, Anthony, and Annia slept for the night, hoping to make more progress soon.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:59 pm


(This time, the viewpoint would be different, you'll see. It will probably be this way for the rest of the story.)

I woke up seeing myself on a boat, way out at sea. Looking around, I at first didn't see anyone, but then I heard something. "Timothy, are you awake yet?"
I recognized Annia and l was about to change into a hawk to catch up when she landed next to me and Anthony said, "We wound up choosing to follow these guys and didn't want to wake you up, sorry about that."
I was about to ask about where we were when the boat landed on the shores of Elibe. However, I at first thought that I was asleep and pinched myself, but the nightmare was true. Technology rose dramatically. I almost fainted, but Annia said, "Come on, we can't give up finding the traveller, although this does look different from what I imagined Elibe to be."
Another voice then said, "Heh, have you not heard of the events that took place, these things happened on Tellius as well, didn't they?"

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:08 pm


(I'm sorry about the delay, writer's block has struck me.)

I remember some of the things that happened that I forgot to write down. Turns out the events in the story were real and that it was Roy who asked if the events happened in Tellius as well. Annia, Anthony, and myself were then sailing towards who knows where. In the meantime, however, I had been pondering just why it was that the town where my friends and I were living in had not been affected yet. However, I knew that it would probably change by the time I got back. I better sign off now.

- Timothy
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 4:31 pm


Annia, Anthony, and myself had been sailing for over two weeks when we landed at Altea. I had noticed strange machines flying overhead at times and was actually a bit amazed at what I had seen. I still doubt that I could fly faster than those. However, I hoped that Marth or anyone else on the continent would know where the traveler was, I missed her stories. However, when I looked at the strange place, I was unable to speak. Anthony was shocked while Annia was amazed. I remember her saying, "One moment we were going through life as we had for a while, the next, all of this happens."
Yeah, I was both amazed and shocked, but I wondered if the traveler knew of this all along. Well, we're currently staying at an inn to rest up, but we'll probably be heading off the next morning, I better get some rest an and sign off for now, whoever you are that reads this.
-Timothy
 

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