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 Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:44 pm
I saw a poem similar to this and wanted to expeiriment a little. It's not actually based on an event that happened to me. I just went with the flow on this one.
Heroes and Liars
If I didn't know better
I'd say you were
Lying.
You told me once that
You never lied, but were
Honest.
That's the thing I guess
About you. Two sides to every
Story.
I hoped for a fairytale
That you were a
Knight.
Shining in armor, bright
Instead you are a
Snake.
Twisted in your own lies
Your silver tongue a
Dagger.
In my heart, twisting
I hoped you were a
Hero.
But you're not even
worth the bottom of his
Shoe.
I'm walking away now
You can hear the tap of my
Footsteps.
Telling you goodbye
Because you wouldn't make an
Effort.
Kindness, you have none
You're cold as stone and
Bitter.
Why take it out on me?
I did my best to
Love.
So much for that
You couldn't at
All.
That's what I gave you
Or tried, but things went
Wrong.
Oh well, I'll be fine
It may take
Time.
Something that no one has anymore
I'm getting mine back
Today.
Fresh and cool and promising
I just wanted to tell you
Goodbye.
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:52 am
I like the way you put that down,it reads weird.
What did you read to inspire it?
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:09 pm
It's a poem called Blood Red by -lacrimosous carmen-. It's actually somewhere toward the bottom of this forum. It was among the first group of poems ever posted here.
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