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Juxtaposition

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Alanora Calaran

PostPosted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:42 pm


Here's another that I wrote while feeling like I needed to get my arse moving on a story I'm writing (but having trouble becoming inspired)! XD

Juxtaposition

Brightness and shadow in juxtaposition
Are like to my heart and my mind.
I search for a method to ease this transition,
But blurred is my vision, fatiguing my mission;
I feel like I’ve fallen behind.

Fallen behind like an autumn leaf gripping
A branch while its brothers drift down,
I grasp at familiar but find myself slipping;
Away I am tipping, descending and dipping
To find my own spot on the ground.

Despite my best efforts I’ve been integrated
With feelings I’ve seldom admired.
Smoothly my mind has been assimilated,
But I have awaited with hope unabated
To know that my heart is inspired.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 6:12 pm


I like this,it's very well written.
And it also gets me thinking that I need to get up off the couch of literary laziness and continue my own stories. :XP:

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