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 Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:29 pm
I will be posting this incredibly slowly, for I hate to type things that I have already written on paper.
It will also be on the longer side, but I will try incredibly hard to make it short (no promises).
I will take critizism at anytime, but it will be deleated by the next bit of my story.
And since I hate the words chapter, part, and scene so, so much, I am going to say act instead, because you know it will be awesome. =;D
I don't like people so this will not be in the areans.
After looking at other's stoys I realized that mine is insanly long... sweatdrop hehe. I wrote over 20 pages in my note book and I'm not even halfway done... hehehe. I'll work on typing tonight.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 6:13 pm
First mission: utter failure, and it was all my fault, not that things weren’t normally my fault, because they usually were. This was my first chance to prove myself useful and I blew it, big time. So badly that I felt it best if I stayed in the back of the group when they began to walk home, I couldn’t even make eye contact with anyone for more than a second, but every few minutes I caught glimpse of a glare in her direction. After what seemed almost twice as long as the walk to the mission, we were finally home. Everyone slowly drifted apart, either going to their rooms or their spot in the main room. I just stood near a wall, not really facing anyone, or anything. I didn’t belong with the rest of them, and she probably never will. The women called Grievance was sitting in a corner, I couldn't really see what she was doing, nor did I want to watch her long enough to find out. The other new member, Brother Malice, sat alone on a chair, he seemed to be thinking. Just being in his presence scared me. I couldn't see any of his memories either..
It wasn‘t just Malice and Grievance though, the whole lot of them scared me. They all seemed so heartless, but they all cared for each other. They fought so well together...And I only messed things up… I looked down, her wretched thoughts making me feel more of an outcast than ever. Maybe I should just go home. I’m not cut out for the “Real” world. I belong with that pile of rubbish I call my brother…I can’t survive out here…
How did I even let myself be so careless in my first mission? How did I let myself become so...pathetic? The negative thoughts flowed through me as if it was just injected into my blood. I held my knees close to me and mumbled "how?" into her knees.
Without warning, a large hand weighed my left shoulder down, making her fall and look up at the black-haired Brother Chaos. The layer of ice covering my hair, making it the lightest blue and icy to touch, was crunching under the weight of my head. He only smiled and assured me that it was alright, I knew it wasn't, but I nodded anyway. No one could possibly be okay with my mistakes today...
For the first time in a while I looked at what she was wearing, a black dress and a cape, both black and made my skin look whiter than it already was. I missed the expensive silks and the finely sewn clothing I was so used to wearing, but there was no way I would ever return to her old life.
I pulled myself upward so that I was back to leaning against the wall. Crossing my arms, meaninglessly trying to gather up all of my body heat. It was hopeless, but I needed my arms around herself, to remind me of the love I once had, the love her brother destroyed. A tear slowly crawled down my cheek, most of it was freezing over the icy layer of skin protecting my own, but the little amount that didn't freeze fell off of my jaw and landed on my arm. Before I knew it, I was breaking out into an uncontrolable sob. The rest of the family just watched, almost as if they knew it was best to not bother me. The rest of the building fell silent.
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:42 pm
Part 1: Normality.
I tell the story of the past few months as if it isn't my life to some people.
Act One: Royalty ((Summary: Lilian's normal life)) I looked around the small group around me. They wanted no know what happened to the princess...Of course I know what happened..I am her, or I guess all that is left of her. I really didn't want to read my diary out in front of these peasants, but they're all that I have now..and I need at least someone else to know what has happened to Lilian, I can't let the old me just die like that....Not since I will have to return to being her once again someday...I looked down at my diary and began to read the diary I have re-written with Hunter and his journal.
Lilian lay asleep in her silver throne, laced with gold and saphires, her legs hanging over one arm and her head resting on the other. Her shiney blonde hair was drapped over the arm of the throne and then hung in beautiful curlets a few inches above the ground. Her tiara was just barly about to slip off her head when her fiance, Hunter caught it and placed it back where it belonged. Hunter was a prince, his kingdom was always in aliance with Lilian's so every few years a princess and prince of the two kingdoms were to be wed. He hoisted her in his arms and carried her up to their tower.
Their room was in the tallest tower and the second floor from the top, and the largest living quarters in the castle. The walls were decorated in blues and blacks and in the center was a four post bed, drapped in silks. Paintings of snowly landscapes and the vigin Mary hung from the walls, but on the wall opposite of the bed hung a beautiful painting of a blonde haired princess, arms of similar looking angel wrapped around her with a warm smile on his face. Hunter carried his fiance to the bed and gently laid her down. Her face moved in the slightest way, Hunter put his hand on her cheek.
"Shh, Princess" Hunter whispered and covered her with a blanket, she was always so cold... ~Time Skips Will Rule The World Someday~
Lilian awoke early in the morning, the sun was just starting to rise and the only sounds to be heard was the waterfals and her father's snores. Being crushed against Hunter, she was finding it hard to breathe. She sqirmed to slip out of his grasp, then stood and put on one of her fancy blue dresses and preceded to the balcany. She could see all of the northern grounds of the castle, and most of the village that is settled around the castle.
She was just barly getting to enjoy the silence when a distance cough broke out. Father! Lilian ran so fast she hardly even remembers turning around. Before knowing it, she was grabbing towels, yelling orders at maids and waking most of the castle.
"Father, please relax." She was now holding yet another towel to her father's mouth. Hunter was gently holding her hair behind her head as he waited for another towl. "It'll be over soon Father" Lilian was never good at sounding relaxed.
A few long minutes passed by until he finaly stopped, all three of them had blood on their clothing. "Th-thank you Lily" The king finaly managed to mumble. He whipped his face off with the last clean towel. "looks like we all need new night robes." He turned to a maid and she nodded.
"Father, you must rest right now." She looked down. "You need to rest"
"Lily, I feel fine. I'm not as old as you think that I am."
She could never bring herself to believe him when he said things like that.
"Hunter, my dear boy, when is my little princess going to be married? She's been waiting for such a long time for you." He paused to look at his daughter. "I remember when your mother and I were getting married, she was so happy even thought it was arranged. She looked beautiful, brunette and tan." He chucked. "You look more like me though. But smaller, shorter and prettier. You do have your mother's eyes though, and her smile"
Lilian smiled warmly at the compliment. Her mother's family never liked her father and would rarly talk to him or Lilian. But if they did it would be about how she smiles like her mother or how she has those big distintive eyes that her mother had. After her mother's death, her mother's family visited less and less until they only recived presents and letters for Lilian durring holidays.
Hunter's face became a bit pink. He adjusted himself quickly and it soon faded. "You'll be pleased to know," he started, "That all of the preparations have been made and Lilian and I shall be wed tomarrow morning."
The king nodded and looked Hunter sternly in the eyes. "You better take good care of my baby girl. I can take her away just as easily as I can give her away."
All Hunter could really do was nod. "Y-yes sir. I wont let anything happen to the princess. I love her so much."
"Promise me one thing" The king didn't wait long enough for Hunter to agree or not before continueing, "Call me Dad, or 'Father' after you marry my daughter, and introduce her as your wife before you mention her being a queen, it'll make her so happy."
Hunter nodded once again. "I promise sir."
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:21 pm
Act Two: Perfection ((Summery: Lilian's wedding day)) Lilian was now back in her own room, the dress maker helping her into her white wedding gown.
"You look so beautiful today miss, I've watched you grow into a beautiful women and now you're getting married, I feel like an old women." The old women continued about how she loved making Lilian's dresses as she grew and how excited she will be when it comes time to make pregrancy dresses for her. After a while Lilian grew bored, answered to questions and nodded the rest of the time.
Lilian glanced out the window at Hunter dressed in traditional wedding clothes. He looks so handsome today...
The dress maker smiled. "Are you ready Princess?"
I paused and looked around the group. I bet they could see the tears I was forcing back, they could see the remorse in my eyes. It is so hard to read about the happiest day of my life now that things were so tough. I wonder if my life will ever be the same again...Then I continued.
Lilian looked at her dress maker and smiled. "I've never been more ready in my entire life." She said.
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Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:23 pm
Act Three: Lies((Summary: Lilian is told about her twin brother Troy and her powers.))
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:52 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:29 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 01, 2009 7:55 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:56 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:01 pm
Wonderland((Is found by the spirit and taken to the Organization))
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