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 Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:27 am
There it is,what you hid so well.
Finally showing the real you;the selfish you.
Can't say I wasn't surprised to know who you really are.
Insensitive,thoughtless and blind.
Careless,unfeeling,unkind.
Wouldn't it have been easier to reveal it from the start.
Instead you played with my feelings,you ******** b*****d.
I put my trust in you and you tore me asunder.
Never you mind how you ******** up my head.
Don't let it bother you that I wish you were dead.
Never once did I question if you'd do this to me.
Never once did I think this would come to be.
Never once did I dig deeper.
Never once did I see.
I should have seen this coming.
And now you should start running.
You broke my heart,I'll break you bones.
You tore my mind,I'll tear your soul.
You took away my peace,I'll take away your life.
Here comes my rage,my serrated blade...
Did you really think you could get away with it?
Did you really think you could play with me?
Then have it your way. Shall we play?
Only this time,we do it my way.
Speak no more words to me.
All I want is simple;
I don't want to hear you plead:
I just want to see you bleed.
Bleed out on the floor;
Cover me with your pain and gore.
End your time,you won't remain.
Cut away your worthless life.
Never again will I bear you.
Never again suffer you to exist.
Suffer.
Bleed.
Are you suffering?
Suffer
Bleed
Hear me laughing.
I'll put the laughter in slaughter.
Kill
You'll die
And there's nothing you can do.
You're lost for hope.
You're losing
You lose
You die
I win.
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Posted: Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:43 am
That flowed so well in my head,
it has such an expressive and aggressive meaning,
I loved the tone,
Very Nice Work!
I don't believe that it would make a very long song tho.
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Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:41 am
When I wrote this,I was so incredibly pissed off,I didn't quite care how long it was;I just needed to get the thoughts out of my mind. Now that I look back at it,I'll probably make some adjustments eventually. I'm just too damn lazy to do anything about it at the moment. :XP:
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:00 am
Well,there it is;finished. Today I was pissed off enough to be able to continue with the exact same line of thought.
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