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 Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:11 pm
Hey!
My name is Emily.
I don't really roleplay that much but I got invited to this guild by a friend. So anyways, I am a writer and this is a story I have been very successful with.
Feel free to PM me or just comment right in this thread.
Happy Reading! 4laugh
CHAPTER 1
“Miyca! Time to get up!” Mom shouts from the kitchen.
“Kay, Mom!” I shout back.
I am Miyca Heden. I’m 16 years old with brown hair that is a little past my shoulders and like everyday; I don’t want to go to school. My school is a normal school for teenage humans and vampires. That’s right. VAMPIRES! Me, I’m a human. I have five friends at my school. Nick and Tanya, who are together, are my human friends, while Dale and Sanyo, who are also together, plus Cole are vampires.
“Miyca!” Mom shouts again.
“I’m up!” I shout loudly. I hate how this house is so large. I begin to fumble around my room, searching for something to wear. Jeans and a tee, that’s all I need. Head downstairs to have breakfast and then I’m out the door. Just another ordinary day… At least I thought so.
As I reach the end of my driveway, I notice someone walking down my street. It’s Cole.
Cole? I think to myself. What’s he doing here? He doesn’t take this road in the morning.
Cole crosses the road over to me.
“Hey, Cole,” I say as he walks up to me. “What are you doing he-?”
I am cut off suddenly by Cole’s lips on mine. My mind freezes in shock. I am kissing Cole, the boy I had a bit of a crush on.
Cole pulls away. “S-sorry,” he stutters, looking at the ground. He turns and continues walking, but in the opposite direction of school.
I stood there as my heart rate rose and my mind filled with fireworks as I tried to comprehend what had just happened. After a few moments, my mind returned to reality.
“Cole,” I say as soon as my mind returns to reality. Cole stops. “You’re going the wrong way.”
“Oh.” He turns, and walks by me, keeping his face concealed. I grab his wrist.
“Wait,” I say quietly. Cole waits, keeping his face consealed as I walk around to face him.
“Why?” I ask. “Why did you kiss me?”
Cole says nothing as he continues to stare at the ground.
“Please, tell me, Cole.”
“Because I…” He pauses as though he doesn’t know what to say. “I…” He stops again. He looks up, his face red with embarrassment, but perfectly framed by his dark brown hair. His brilliant brown eyes meet mine. “I love you!”
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:20 pm
Going good so far. But i need more in order to fully love it. its adorable so far. and im a writer myself. smile
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DuvalSunset10 Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 3:57 pm
I write some stories here and there i am more of a poet if anything and i am going to put a forum here for all art writing drawing pictures and so forth
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 4:26 pm
ok i know it needs work but here's the next chapter
Chapter 2
“I love you!”
Cole waits for a reaction from me. I want to tackle him with a big hug, but decide that it wouldn’t be smart to do on the street. So I just smile and ask, “Really?”
“Yes, ever since day one. When I first looked in your beautiful brown eyes, I knew you were the one.”
Suddenly, bad memories flood into my mind. Memories of my childhood, where a boy was dared to say he loves me and then say he hated me. My heart still ached from that day. I feel as though a dagger was being plunged through my heart.
“What’s wrong, Miyca?” Cole asks as my smile fades away.
“You’re lying,” I whisper. A tear rolls down my cheek.
“What?” Cole staggers back a step.
“Someone put you up to this!” I turn and start running away. However, I don’t get far from Cole, the fastest runner at our school.
He grabs my wrist, jerking me back towards him. Next thing I know, Cole has me in a headlock and my hands trapped behind me. I try to free myself, but every attempt fails.
“Miyca,” Cole whispers in my ear. “Listen to me.”
I look over my shoulder at him. His eyes are red from crying and his cheeks covered with a mixture of sweat and tears.
“Why, Miyca? Why would I lie to you?” Cole’s voice cracks. Suddenly, I remembered that Cole never knew much about my childhood. I am consumed in guilt as tears run down my face.
“I’m sorry, Cole,” I whisper back. “I forgot you don’t know much about my childhood.”
Cole releases me. “It’s okay.”
I turn and face him. Without a word, he starts wiping away all the trails of tears from my cheeks.
“I should tell you what happened to me that made me react like that,” I tell him.
“Well, not now, sweetie,” Cole says as he glances at his watch. “Now, we have to run!”
“Oh fudge!” I curse. “Tell me we’re not going to be late.”
We begin a mad dash towards the direction of school. Cole keeping his pace close to mine.
Great! We‘ll never make it in time, I think madly to myself. So much for my perfect attendance.
An attendance that will stay perfect. A voice suddenly responds in my mind.
Wait! What the heck?!
No time to explain. Brace yourself! the voice calls again. The next thing I know, I am high above the ground in Cole’s arms.
Wait! Cole, are you reading my thoughts? I ask.
Yes, I know it’s rude to so, but your thoughts were so pure. I couldn’t help it. I’m sorry.
It’s alright, but I have one question.
Sure. Ask away.
Well actually, two questions. One: did you know that I had a crush on you? And two: Are you going to be able to land while carrying me?
One: Yes, I did. I picked it up by chance one day. And two: I really don't know. I have never flown while carrying anyone, but if I remember correctly, the vaulting team left the mats out yesturday. We can land on one of them.
Cole altered the direction we were headed towards the school's football field.
Sure enough. The blue vaulting mats stood out against the dark red track that bordered the field.
Just moments before landing, Cole turns us over so I land on top of him.
"Cole, are you alright?" I ask as I crawl off him.
"Yeah," Cole replies and pushes himself up. He jumps off the mat and stretchs his back. "Come on! We better get inside."
Cole helps me off the mat and we run to the only way on and off the field; a single gate in the chain link fence. However, as we approch it, we notice that it has been locked.
"No!" I yell. I see Cole preparing to climb over. "I can't climb."
Cole looks at me. "We really don't have a choice."
"Hey! You two need a hand?" Someone asks. We look to see a boy standing on the other side of the fence. He's a bit taller than Cole with dark black hair. A long cloak hangs from his shoulders.
"Yes! Can you get one of the janitors to unlock the gate?" I ask.
"No, but I can get you guys out right now," he replies. He reaches his hand towards the lock and it pops open.
"Thank you!" I rush over to the gate and remove the lock.
"See ya around." The boy runs off.
"Who was that?" Cole asks.
"I don't know. I was about to ask you the same thing."
"Oh well. Come on. Lock the gate and let's get inside."
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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:23 pm
It is good if i still had my story i would put it up here even though I never got to finish it.
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Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:44 pm
I like it, but your chapters are a little too short.
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DuvalSunset10 Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:28 pm
yeah i know their a bit on the short side i'm going to be working on making them more detailed once i get the chance
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