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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:05 pm


Tragedy looms over this house and myself,
heart has failed,love's blood flows freely upon the floor;
I can not clean the blood!
It will not wash from the wood!
My soul is now stained,
incapable of comprehension,
lost.
Should I try to drink the blood,
would my tongue clean such a stain?
My soul would not accept the nourishment,
loves bloody stain has turned to poison,
malice spreads through my veins,as my body dies;
Death shall be my mercy,
pain and suffering,
the chosen items to clean.
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Hopeless
PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:37 pm


Tragic indeed. On a side note,maybe you should put an apostrophe in the word 'loves',that kinda confused me for a sec.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:45 am


I just love the way you kick me for my punctuation!I really do!
This is the support I don't get anywhere else,I truly appreciate that!
PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:13 am


lol Well;you're welcome. It's a habit I got from my mom;she always does that.

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